Reviews for Massed Up
mistersnx chapter 2 . 4/29
My god some prep time and training rare to see in these fics and this was from back then neat!
RDJN chapter 2 . 2/20
Just lil old me being sad the mc didnt punch the chairman :( "do what you want" "dont fuck the timeline". Bah, I hope mc does what he wants but i guess this chairman is going to strictly steer the story
LiamYouSOB chapter 1 . 2/7
Truck-kun claims another victim. Will his reign of terror ever be brought to an end?
FelixtheSax chapter 38 . 11/7/2019
Hey, first off, I’m really enjoying this so far. I kind of wish there was more messing around with the plot, but it seems like Virmire is the go/no go point for that, what with the choice to be made. But I felt like I had to chime in and mention that I got a kick out of reading this and knowing that according to a lot of reviews I’ve seen, the sixth terminator is going to be the best since the first two, and that Arnold is still in it. :P I’ll get back to reading now. And happy N7 day!
Verdauga chapter 6 . 8/14/2019
Oof and ouch. *pain intensifies*
Verdauga chapter 5 . 8/14/2019
Interesting choice. I like it.
Verdauga chapter 3 . 8/14/2019
I watch from the comfort of the shadows for it is my home.
Verdauga chapter 2 . 8/14/2019
Yeah, freak out is justified.
Pteaset chapter 2 . 8/10/2019
I’ve read a bunch of self inserts and a lot of them the biggest problem I have is describing the transition that gets them into the mass affect universe you do that very well it’s one of the best things about your story
dantezess chapter 2 . 5/12/2019
so we have ROB like every other novel ive read like this rob has forbidden the MC to change the fate of the world drastically going to die because of it. Remind me why I want to read this when everything will just be same as the actual games just with some new characters and a new view point?
Sullenwhitedevil chapter 31 . 3/20/2019
Awesome chapter I personally don't remember much of what you fight if anything on saleons ship in mass effect 1 but I will say this you did a pretty good job in my opinion on how it got real dark on the drop of a dime in no time at all while also being pretty fluid at as well and I am curious to see just how much else has drastically changed, and honestly I would like to think Cerberus and even the shadow broker would know about that zombie serum
Sullenwhitedevil chapter 25 . 3/17/2019
Really? I can tolerate all the hate you give the ending for mass effect 3's ending despite the fact it's not really that bad in my opinion, it's not perfect by no means and they did do some shady things yes such as the from ashes dlc with javik, however hearing you complaining about how they humored the fans and gave them a picture of Tali's face and you complain about the fact they get a random picture off the internet for it or were "lazy" about how it looks despite the fact they didn't have to do that? By this point you sound like those people you hear about that get a blue frickin Ferrari and you wanted a red one instead and throw a temper tantrum like a child! I don't blame bioware when I look back at the ending for mass effect due to how the fans acted if how you act towards them is any indication since it's also like those people who for whatever reason say Tali looks to human or some crap. I was told by a former friend to not like be ending without spoiling it for me. At first I disliked it, but then 2-3 days later as I'm about to go to sleep for school after beating the game, I thought to myself "you know what that ending wasn't all that bad as they made it out to be, could it have been better? Yes. But it wasn't that bad." Honestly by this point it's just like with star wars with George Lucas, he practically sold the franchise because the fans ruined it for him, it was no longer fun because of how they act when they don't get there way, and no matter what bioware does it's never good enough for you considering how you act since for a LOT OF AUTHOR NOTES you constantly hate on it without actually being specific enough to show why our actions don't mean anything, for example it does matter since certain characters will still live, you choose destroy all ai are dead, the geth and ED are gone, that matters. Not to mention the ending explained why the reapers did what they did, if they just put a gun to the entire galaxies head and said "you all are going to get along or die" that isn't going to work, it has to be naturally achieved, and before anyone says the quarians and get did no they didn't. It was during the end of the cycle meaning they are being pressured to do so because they are both needed to fight the reapers not to mention it took an anomaly such as Shepard to do anything, and even then unless you get specific things in the story you can't have both, the quarians still continue at the end to wipe out the geth, and not to mention the rest of the galaxies view on ai, so no it wasn't true natural peace, before anyone sends hate mail on this, I am not attempting to be a jerk about this, but constantly hearing this is ridiculous, even years after the game I still hear about it, enough is enough and I am tired of seeing people go purely off there emotions and not give actual sound reasons for why the game is so bad all because of it's ending when in the end your choices do matter, they especially showed this with the extended cut dlc
D72 chapter 40 . 3/13/2019
I really, really like skull team. Reminds me of republic commando. Man that was a fun game.
D72 chapter 11 . 3/7/2019
well ME rounds are grains of sand, so yeah, two band-aids would cut it, unless there are Ammo mods. Then you're just flat dead.
D72 chapter 7 . 3/7/2019
Eh, maybe it's the RPG MurderHobo in me, but if he got so much money for his cell, a couple guns with the serial numbers filed off should bring in CRIMECASH. Maybe get the armor off a headshot dude before he shits himself.

Actually, has he bought any clothing yet? Or is he rocking super stinky threads?
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