|Reviews for A Christmas Proposal|
| Proffesor Snape chapter 1 . 2/22
Stupid muggle. Why in the name of Merlin would you put, " Severus goes shopping in the human world" , when i am a human? Your your exceeding arrogance is giving me a headache. One of the qualities of a Griffindor. Since you so clearly are one, 10 points from Griffindor. And Ravenclaw. And Huffelpuff. For good measure. Have a pleasant day.
| Breanna3593 chapter 1 . 1/17/2015
Eh. Very out of character and not very well written. I hope your writing has improved over time.
| excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
Oh, this is nice! And I am sure that both of them can put spells on that ring to make it mean even more than it already does.
| David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
cute cute cute
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
Why don't you learn the language first before you go and try to write a story. Your english is horrible so please: LEARN THE LANGUAGE!
| pumpkin314159 chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
The story was cute. However, watch out for run on sentences. Almost every sentence was a run on which made it much more difficult to understand the story.
| criticat chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
This is the first Harry Potter fic that I have ever read and it is good!
| TequilaNervous chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Awww! What a beautiful Christmas gift! Lovely story!
| kitt46 chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
This is so much better written. I hope you continue to write.
All the best, Kitt