Reviews for Deteriorate
Guest chapter 4 . 9/17/2014
I agree giraffes are amazing. Giraffes are the tallest terrestrial animals alive today.
eden chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
hi carlos pena jr I have diarrhea sorry it im feeling underweahter I poop in bedsheet and sweatpants and aslo underwear I try to get my sister on the phone but guess you can say she was sleep ps I will be fine later love you carlos pena jr
Musa'sHeadphones chapter 13 . 7/30/2014
yumyumbear chapter 13 . 7/24/2014
This is an amazing story. I LOVE it!
MagicMoonyx chapter 13 . 6/26/2014
Why aren't you updating this? It's so great! I need to know what's wrong with poor Carlitos, please!
Blue Leah chapter 11 . 3/9/2014
Second time I've read this story and now I'm begging you to update even though it's been 1.5 years. Pretty please with a cherry on top?
penaschmidt chapter 13 . 7/21/2013
the amount of times i have read the first 13 chapters of this story is ridic! i realise its been a year since you updated, so im not expecting this story to ever get done, but i dunno could you like maybe just let us know what you had planned?
Spice of Life chapter 13 . 5/20/2013
Can you please please Pleeease update this? I need to know what happens!
InsertUnoriginalPenNameHere chapter 13 . 3/21/2013
UGHHHH! It's getting me frustrated that I don't know what it is! GAAAH! I'd be a terrible doctor.

I was listening to My Immortal by Evanescence and almost cried when they all climbed in bed with Carlos! AWWW! D'X :') I love their bond. I really hope this gets updated!
InsertUnoriginalPenNameHere chapter 12 . 3/21/2013
I feel so dumb because I don't know what multiple sclerosis is... Or Ataxia. I don't know what the hell the doctor is saying, but all I know is they sound really bad DX if I were told I had those, I'd be so scared because before I didn't know what myopia was when I went to go get my eyes checked, and they said I had myopia and I immediately thought I had some kinda eye cancer xD turns out it means you can't see far. Well. I hate hospitals. xD

Poor Carlitos! :'(
InsertUnoriginalPenNameHere chapter 9 . 3/21/2013
Oh no! I wonder what would happen if this happened in real life...
InsertUnoriginalPenNameHere chapter 8 . 3/21/2013
Awww my Carlitos DX
InsertUnoriginalPenNameHere chapter 7 . 3/21/2013
Oh no! They have to do it without Carlos? He'd be devastated DX
InsertUnoriginalPenNameHere chapter 3 . 3/21/2013
ASFGJKL tell me the rest of the story! :D

Aw, that sucks, being lighters away, and them only being on for 30 minutes... At east you saw them!

Something is really fishy with Carlos...
InsertUnoriginalPenNameHere chapter 2 . 3/21/2013

I love you.

Carlos is better? That's weird...
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