Reviews for A Snipers view
Vidoshield chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
well, it can't really fit in here. Try putting in a COD character name to the sniper and list this as AU (alternate universe). It might work then.

Alright, grammar and spelling needs some more work. You shouldn't rely on beta readers to do all the grammar works. They're there to catch the stray bits that went unnoticed.

The story itself is kinda good. Short, but meaningful.

All in all, I'd give it a 3/5. 4/5 if i exclude grammar from the calculation.

I'll keep track of your works!