|Reviews for The Johns Green|
| siriuslymay chapter 37 . 1/15
WOW! I'm so happy that I was given the link to this amazing story! I fell in love with these two character hearing John talk about them while playing hank games but you really gave these two life. Every chapter was a joy to read and I truly dreaded getting to the end. I love this ship and the team. In the chapter where many were being traded it actually hurt to see them go. You made me love all of them even Patrick (which is why it so much to hear him say those things) I loved the johns families too. I'm also including Hannah in that because she was beyond amazing! I kind of feel like other John when I say thank you for writing this story and thank you for sharing it...though thank you isn't nearly enough! This was truly beautiful!
| siriuslymay chapter 11 . 1/13
Again had to stop and review! That kiss was worth the wait! So much tension! Poor bald John, the guilt just gripped me. Amazing chapter!
| siriuslymay chapter 7 . 1/13
I wanted to wait to review again till I go to the end but I couldn't help myself. This chapter was just so beautiful! Holding hands on the bus...GAH. I love these two so much I can't wait to see how they finally get together!
| siriuslymay chapter 1 . 1/12
Just started reading and I just love this first chapter! Thank you for writing this story!
| Part-Time Irish chapter 37 . 11/29/2013
Thank you for this brilliant story. I have to confess, I've only started watching recently, but somehow the latest wimbly wombly vid made me want to know more about the Johns. So, again, thank you for this. It's exactly what I hoped for when I typed "swinden town swoodlypoopers fanfiction" into Google...
| Guest chapter 19 . 11/14/2013
I love you so much for this, it was everything I wanted to find when I googled for fanfiction of the John Greens. Thank you 3
| Naruto-junky chapter 37 . 11/10/2013
... I- I mean I can't- How do you even- GAH! ... Okay with the feels out of the way: This was an amazing story, right up there with actual printed books. Better then some even! I could feel the emotional ups and downs that the Johns went through, and not only their emotional journey but Cteve's trouble with his child and Fat Lucas struggling to watch his teammates drink when he couldn't and Voluptuous choosing to go home and be with his family and the frustration the whole team felt knowing that they might not play in the league that they had desperately fought to get to.
You brought life to a bunch of pixels that were jokingly named and given backstories while a man played a video game. Sure, it was an unusual source. Sure, this just proves that we are all to emotionally invested in a bunch of pixels. But this story makes that just a little bit okay.
I love this story and thank you for writing it. DFTBA!
| Naruto-junky chapter 11 . 11/9/2013
Okay, so I told myself after the first review that I would read the entire 100,000 words before commenting on the brilliance of it all again. But: GAH! If I wasn't already obsessed with the back story of the groupings of pixels known as the Johns Green I would be now. I love the emotions and the sense of reality, that maybe somewhere in a parallel/alternate universe the Johns might actually be sharing their first kiss.
| Naruto-junky chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
So, I just recently found the Swoodilypoopers and the Johns Green. And as a major fanfiction lover, I am delighted to see something this awesome! And not only were you awesome enough to write the love story of the Johns Green for all of the dedicated Swindon Town fans who are far too invested in a bunch of pixels, you went and did it properly. I can't wait to read the rest of it.
| GealachGirl chapter 37 . 10/2/2013
Well, that was just fantastic.
| Dave Jacobs chapter 37 . 9/29/2013
Thank you for this. I'll never watch another Swoodilypoopers video the same way again. It was excellent.
| GealachGirl chapter 17 . 9/29/2013
I do really like this chapter, but I'm confused. Has Bald John talked to Matt about Other John before now?
| GealachGirl chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
I love this and it is now what I'm going to do while not doing things like pre-calc.
| Lizzie chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
Youve don't it, haven't you? I want to read on, but I'n afraid that I won't be able to unread anything... Oh well.
Ps- great job, by the way :)
| Artish chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
Jesus Christ this is good! I mean really this is kind of disgustingly good! Gah!