|Reviews for Wait A Sec, Wasn't I Human!|
| Guest chapter 20 . 6/18
If. You rewrite this chapter have jack take the star saber and have it work for him and optimus die and the matrix join with his spark and him become the new leader of the autobots
| Guest chapter 12 . 5/8
Your story is actually really good despite of the few grammatical and spelling errors.
| Grempoots2 chapter 20 . 5/1
Beautiful, the way that Jack reveal the truth made me cry - this way has more character development than the previous one.
'Arcee and Jack sitting in a tree k-i-s-s-i-n-g.'
You never knew how much I love that relationship.
| bajy chapter 20 . 3/17
I love this story!
how saddening, heart wrenching, touching, heart warming. ...
it was great!
I'm glad that everything turned out okay in the end!
| countdooku123 chapter 2 . 7/18/2016
pleas make more i like it a lot
| Guest chapter 20 . 6/24/2016
Wow that was really good I loved it.
| Rocker on chapter 20 . 6/24/2016
TMI dude, TMI. Don't make them be in love. They always do that. At least don't give info on the kiss! As I said, TMI...
| Rocker on chapter 19 . 6/24/2016
Just turn them human already! We don't want to see the info on the screen of the details of their kiss. TMI dude! TMI!
| Rocker on chapter 18 . 6/24/2016
And when will we see Megatron again? Next chapter is my geuss.
| Rocker on chapter 17 . 6/23/2016
You should get the owl city song 'This isn't the end'. It really ties into a situation semi like this... except without the murder. 'It was Jack Darby, in the bedroom, with a knife'. Wonder if he thinks his life is like a clue game. I think so. Because eventually, everyone found out who it was.
| Rocker on chapter 16 . 6/23/2016
Please stop making Jack break down in tears! Its ruining the story! Just let him get a matrix, become a prime, then turn back into a human. I know there are at least 2 dozen people who want the same thing.
| Rocker on chapter 15 . 6/23/2016
So... When will Fowler come into play? I mean, it would probably be something the 'bots should tell him, you know, when three of earths citizens turn into aliens.
| Rocker on chapter 11 . 6/23/2016
Why did you have to do that to one of my favorite characters in TFP?! WHY?! Jack wouldn't hurt cyber fly, why would he go for the knife? You should have just made it so that his dad had left, and they never heard of him again, make them assume he was chilling in Florida, or that he was dead, or maybe both! But not that.
| Rocker on chapter 8 . 6/23/2016
Wonder when their going to do their alt modes.
| Rocker on chapter 7 . 6/23/2016
I just realized, what happened to their clothes?