|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Ultimate Force|
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/22
To many Authors notes if you need to add them your not doing the storyline right
| Mastersgtjames chapter 22 . 9/13
Bummer that the story has been abandoned.
| Mastersgtjames chapter 20 . 9/13
Surprised no one scanned that Cloak for compulsion charms. Also surprised none of the sisters noticed it was a Hallow.
| Mastersgtjames chapter 17 . 9/13
So... NO ONE were keeping eyes on Hogwarts, and Harry has not written anyone anything? About the threat of death, or anything else?
| Mastersgtjames chapter 14 . 9/13
Yeah... Hagrid is a bad choice to send.
Really hope they have been teaching Harry Occlumency.
Hopefully they keep CLOSE eye's on what happens at Hogwarts, Snape and Dumbles especially.
Man, reading about EVERYONE wanting Fudge for Minister was like watching a car accident.
| Mastersgtjames chapter 13 . 9/13
Supreme Mugwump(of the ICW) or Chief Warlock(of the Wizengamot), but NOT Supreme Warlock.
Bummed that no one has done anything about those Harry Potter books.
| Mastersgtjames chapter 12 . 9/13
Here's hoping that Harry will get Hedwig when he turns 11...
| Mastersgtjames chapter 8 . 9/13
Bummed they did not check if Dumbles had stolen or misused any of the Potter property or money. Which I am confident he has, not even mentioning the cloak.
| Mastersgtjames chapter 6 . 9/13
Here's hoping that they teach Harry to spot lies and manipulation. Otherwise he is going to be used by a LOT of people.
| Mastersgtjames chapter 5 . 9/13
Here's hoping they educate Harry better than he would receive at Hogwarts. Cover his "muggle" education, especially since when at Hogwarts, he will be unable to do so. Teach more about magic than Hogwarts does. Since Potions and History are a joke there, as well as them not teaching ANYTHING(that we know) of Warding, Cursebreaking, Enchanting, Mind Magic, Soul MAgic(if there is any that is not evil), Blood/Flesh Magic, Ritual Magic, Alchemy, etc...
Too bad the MC does not have any hidden/latent magical abilities like metamorphmagic, mage sight, etc...
| Mastersgtjames chapter 2 . 9/13
Kinda bothered by their seeming lack of effort to look into the background of events. No mention(so far) of making sure Dumbles is not tampering with the Potter properties/monies, no mention of the fact he has stolen AT LEAST one of Harry's family heirlooms, specifically the cloak. She made no attempt to read Dumbles mind, which I would have thought she should have, even if only to ensure his intentions.
| cko2 chapter 1 . 8/10
Just got done reading this story. Very fun and very different from lots of other Harry potter stories. Keeps the goddesses down to earth and not having the out of this world stuff that happens in the series with them.
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/15
What use are the so called powerful wards if anyone, even evil or bad intentioned wizard can just knock and enter. stupid
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/15
Oh so like other stories Harry doesn't get any help until he is almost 9yrs old. Too late.
| pavook chapter 21 . 4/17
Bad move from Ron. He might be a chess prodigy, but even a moderately intelligent person would replace the most important pieces first, like King and Queen. They are more likely to be kept safe than let's say bishop or pawn.