|Reviews for Losing A Friend (Editing)|
| Sarah Hawkins chapter 32 . 3/6
Hi. I know you wrote this story ages ago, but ive gotta tell you how much I love it! Really enjoyed reading this one. I am also reading your other story that you are Working on currently. Really enjoying that one too. Please update it soon! ;)
| M ria chapter 15 . 12/10/2013
Wow u are good at putting emotion I seriously cry!
| muggleborn.dragon.ryder chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
If you ever do decide to redo this idea though, I think you should add in a scene where Jim overhears Silver saying to Lance, 'you got the makings of greatness in ya!' or something really similar to what he said to Jim because ANGST. :D
| muggleborn.dragon.ryder chapter 25 . 10/1/2013
Um...this isn't gonna become slash, is it?
| TheSecretMarauder chapter 32 . 9/8/2013
This is an awesome story! Great job!
| muggleborn.dragon.ryder chapter 15 . 8/10/2013
This chap was like, awesome :) hey, are you editing this currently or is this the edited version? just wondering :)
I'm addicted to this story :) ooh and chapter 16 is called 'The Truth Revealed'? Will Silver finally believe Jim?
Also, don't worry about your pirate talk. I don't know the first thing about it, either, but your Silver accent seems pretty good to me (and by pretty good I mean I could easily hear him saying everything)
| Ann-bananz chapter 32 . 8/5/2013
I want to apologize again for what I said before, I would take back every word I said if it was possible. You're a very talented writer and I hope that you keep following your dreams. This story is absolutely amazing, and so much longer than I could even imagine attempting to write or even think of. The characters were perfect and I really liked the ending. I've read a few of your other stories, and you have improved a lot in your writing style and voice. I hope you keep writing and ignore the dumb, idiotic sociopathic losers like me (:
| Ann-bananz chapter 18 . 7/30/2013
I just would like more action, but I guess this fic isn't for me, sorry, but I don't feel like reading anymore.
| Ann-bananz chapter 16 . 7/30/2013
I wish you wouldn't end it when you could have made it so much better with more action, but I can easily see it really isn't your best area of work by what you have so far.
| Ann-bananz chapter 4 . 7/30/2013
Try using more punctuation to help with explaining things.
| Ann-bananz chapter 3 . 7/30/2013
I can't help but notice that the timing is weird. It's like Jim goes to bed and when he wakes up the sun is setting, but it's morning. Just a little weird
| Ann-bananz chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Interesting, try to look for errors.
| Ann-bananz chapter 15 . 7/30/2013
I just can't really tell if you're trying to sound cool or like a pirate with the weird words, or if your English is bad.
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/30/2013
try using weren't instead of wasn't, and read a little more carefully if you are trying for no mistakes
| Bethy124 chapter 30 . 6/28/2013
I'm so glad I found this fic! Amazing writing, storyline and the way you've portrayed the characters is fantastic! I can't wait to read more when you get your computer sorted!