Reviews for Peace is a Lie
Akira Shan chapter 10 . 4/20
Well this is way different then the game. I like it as I was worried Kuro and Kory would be devastated if Zash betrayed them. She is there mother after all.
pt1oef chapter 13 . 3/23
I'm not sure what really happened.
pt1oef chapter 10 . 3/23
Your story will be a very good reference.
pt1oef chapter 6 . 3/23
You made everything so so SWEET!
pt1oef chapter 1 . 3/22
Interesting change, but your main character is male or female?
Redery chapter 1 . 1/22/2016
Very interesting. Just started playing swtor lol. Love the story but not the gameplay so figured I'd see if they have some good ffs. This looks really good and can't wait to catch up
Guest chapter 11 . 10/11/2015
I like it, but it dicgusted me to no end. You see I found out that lesbians, that's if you are a female are a virus to this planet, an infection that must be irradiated into extinction, if that doesn't happen. The humanity won't make it very far into the future.
Nightmare wolf0 chapter 15 . 2/20/2015
Awesome story and I can't wait until the sequel. If u don't it on the Regan expsion thats comming out I would go be on the gameplay and mabey let kuro and ashara have a child
Guest 420 chapter 4 . 6/30/2014
Freak supporters, you're just as bad as these things are
TheAwesomeBroNelly chapter 11 . 6/21/2014
What? What did Talos, of all people, do to deserve death? Heed others' advice and make your character someone who's not a psychopathic, man-hating bitch, will you?
TheAwesomeBroNelly chapter 9 . 6/21/2014
Alright, I have to ask: Why does your character loathe men, exactly? Just because she's a lesbian doesn't mean she has to hate them. You're just supporting the "all lesbians are man-haters" stereotype.
Zero The Grimm chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
Hey iv read your Overlord stories and all of your SWTOR stories. Well from this post I read them like a year or more ago but thought I should finally post. I always love to read about your stories the only things I have to add as criticism is that your SWTOR character always seems a bit overpowered. It's always bugged me a bit just pointing out. Also there just seems to be a way in your story where her opinions are always so well not to say harsh but so one minded. Kind of hard to explain. Still though love your writing.
Michael Bourne chapter 14 . 12/3/2013
all hail the new lord of the sith
DaireneCallahan chapter 15 . 11/6/2013
Excellent fanfic overall! A bit heavy on the erotic side (I suppose some people like that), but clearly someone who has played through the SWTOR Inquisitor story and noted details very thoroughly! I like that!
Personally, I'm all for human and Twi'lek females (blue are the best), but not so much for Togrutas. I'm glad you had Kory and Corrin survive, they were great- I always had a soft spot for them- and Kuro was a good Sith and didn't let Elana Thul die!
I'm irked that Kuro killed Lord Kirnon, though, and she could've won Darth Achelon over as an ally- had she not destroyed his ship! They needn't be major characters, but what's the harm in having a few more minons? Kuro said she didn't want to kill Imperial soldiers- well, the Empire can even less afford to waste good Sith! Isn't that what Kory's survival was meant to prove?
That said, you thinking about writing about the flashpoints / Makeb expansions (Rise of the Hutt Cartel)? I think you should. "Scary" Darth Marr will prove a key ally (in the Sith politics, of course)

BTW, are you a girl with strange fetishes? Or a guy who actually has a good grasp of human emotions?

Signing off,
-Staunch Star Wars Fan
DARKNESS4311 chapter 3 . 12/4/2012
cool chapter I am steal giggling a Sith orgy I am sorry but I think that fits as a Sith order and in the scoup of it all though I do wish you couple pull a mission like that in the game of the old republic, I cant waste to read more of it I just thought I share what I was thinking as it was steal fresh in my mind
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