Reviews for All That I
ingridgrieg chapter 3 . 5/19/2006
again, i love this.

I am on a h/hr fanfic binge. so i am reading all your works in one day.

I must say I wish I discovered shipping before HBP, but then again...I am just glad there are stories like yours. :)
rockergurl13 chapter 3 . 8/27/2005
AW! this was so cute! btw, i don't know if you know, but you're on my favorite authors list!
Pinku-koneko chapter 3 . 2/13/2004
'you are my heart' *sob* wish someone could say that to me! it was great! off to read more *wink*
Leah6 chapter 3 . 10/11/2003
i love it. your writing is great. i wish i could write like you. cant wait to read more.
Erise chapter 3 . 9/16/2003
The first chapter got me - it sounded like it was Harry, but the red hair caught me offguard. Thank goodness the second chapter cleared things up )
MoreThanFourSidesToMe chapter 3 . 4/14/2003
aw... that is so sweet. ive never sen a h/hr ship one that way, Im beining to think were running out of original ways to do it. but this is great. i love all you stories Ive read. hopfuly Ive reviewed all. anywho, keep it coming. L
brazilianfan chapter 3 . 3/3/2003
It's so cute! I almost cried! Good job you did here.

Just yesterday I discovery your stories, and I'm liking it.

Keep writing!

Sorry for my english.

coolone007 chapter 3 . 1/23/2003
Fluffy Feather on top of big pillows... You are the master of fluff.

This is not a bad thiing.
archforge chapter 3 . 1/21/2003
Lovely, very lovely ending...

It's not fairy tale like a lot of story try for, which is good. Life isn't completly a fairy tale.

Expecially for one Harry Potter.

Until Then.
archforge chapter 2 . 1/21/2003
Very, sad...


Good Job!


Until Then!
archforge chapter 1 . 1/21/2003
Very interesting...

I'm a H/Hr person but this was very well written.

Until Then.
Animagus-Steph chapter 3 . 1/21/2003
Yumi... that was so good, I stopped breathing for a bit. I realized that I wasn't breathing when I read the bit about Percy... that cracked me up, oh it was sooo funny.


Whoa. I just spaced out there for a minute, sighing over how great of a story this was. I am so pleased with it.

Okay... So, a few things I want to comment on. I really enjoyed the format this was told in... Using each player's pov was really effective, and bringing it together at the end was nice. Good work, as it always is.

In this particular chapter, I enjoyed a few choice lines: He had begun to pace back and forth in front of her, dying to tell her the truth but afraid to live.

Yumi, that was incredible. I reread it three times, just enjoying how lyrical~is that the word I want? literal? Well written, certainly.

And, I truly think this is my favorite: Ron would have hexed me to hell and back if Hermione hadn’t hexed him first.

I hate Ron.

I'm sorry, I had to get that out.

Okay, and one technical complaint: I had he who I loved. I have he who I love !
ChrisMiss chapter 3 . 1/21/2003
All the angst! I read the first chapter and almost had a heart attack because Harry was with Ginny and Hermione was just sitting there on the sidelines. Then I read your AN and I breathed a sigh of relief...there was going to be more; I wasn't going to be left hanging. Excellent ficlet Yumi...for all it's angst it was perfect because although they were happy not everyone else was. The Weasleys were justifiably angry...and that suited me because all too often the Weasleys are supportive. Also it was kinda funny how both Harry and Hermione were so stupid as to think that the other didn't care. It's cliche in all circles but I think it's sweet.

Danski chapter 3 . 1/21/2003
WoW Fuyumi, I love this story of yours, too! I almost squeal with excitment when there is a author alert in my inbox from you!

This was a adorable story!

daniellover12 chapter 2 . 11/30/2002
Please please please please please please please

continue i would love for you to continue. I was wondering if you have seen the new Harry Potter movie Yet? IF would like to answer then my email is or so feel free to e-mail me if you like!
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