Reviews for The Alchemist's Game
Alchemyfreak42 chapter 13 . 6/8
Okay, no. Just...no. Ed was taken down by something as feeble as a stab wound to the stomach? Might I remind you that he had a freaking SUPPORT BEAM through his internal organs in Briggs? If he were stabbed through the stomach, he would laugh. And then use the sword to gut the guy who did it. By the way, you have a lot of serious spelling and grammar errors in this fic. Good day to you, sir/madam.
Alchemyfreak42 chapter 8 . 6/8
Okay, I have some issues with this. One, Ed is a soldier. That means that he would never be taken by surprise, and he wouldn't be SLEEPING far enough away from his weapons that he couldn't access them in case he was magically taken by surprise. Two, Ed is a soldier. That means that there is no way in Hell that he would be beaten by a pair of green, inexperienced kids. He took down an entire group of terrorists when he was twelve. He spends his free time terrorizing the morons who call him short. He was freaking impaled, and didn't even bother passing out. He fucking punched out a god.
Tethriot chapter 8 . 2/6/2015
I'm sorry, but I just can't go on. The characters seem blatantly OOC, and the fact that you feel like Ed would ever reveal such a secret like his alchemy was the final straw.

-Tethriot.
theWolfiestWolfA chapter 1 . 7/21/2014
theWolfiestWolfAlive
There's something up with my yahoo account and I forgot my fanfic password, so until that's resolved, I'm just going around reading stuff.

I really like the way this is playing out, but there are a few spelling and grammar errors. nothing major. (my personal opinion) sometimes its better if the story doesn't fall together too conveniently.
Moceous-Ketsu chapter 14 . 11/27/2013
I enjoyed it alot the thought of rue living excites me alot. Now its getting interesting. I cant wait to read part 2. More full metal characters would be awesome. The thought of Katniss and Hawkeye back to back in the capitol shooting capitol soldiers excites me. But well see. Good stuff good stuff.
Moceous-Ketsu chapter 2 . 11/27/2013
I am Seriously digging this story i think you got ed spot on. I'm looking forward to someone calling him short in the games i hope to hear more from you keep up the good work
wishfulliving89 chapter 14 . 10/18/2013
love the story very well written. so love this ending better then the movie/book version of it, cry when rue got kill.
Fi Suki Saki chapter 14 . 9/5/2013
Oh...!
That's... Unexpected a nice ending...!

Really nice! Though failed, but still nice! ;)
Guest chapter 4 . 8/1/2013
I liked the second part better because of the strajistic planning
SakuraDreamerz chapter 5 . 7/30/2013
*snickers* Im thinking the District 6 male insulted him XD.
And I think I know the perfect short rant for Ed to say:
Ed: "WHO ARE YOU CALLING SO SMALL YOU WANNA CRUNCH HIM LIKE AN ANT?!"
Anywho, this is getting really good! :D
Guest chapter 3 . 1/5/2013
EDWARD Y U NO SECRETIVE :'(
Guest chapter 2 . 1/5/2013
JUST NOTICED THE NO FLAMES WARNING,
but its true...

Also, no warning on this chapter...

WAA THIS STORY SUCKS YU SPELLED MINITE WONG WAA IM A WHINY BORED ASSHOLE
Guest chapter 2 . 1/5/2013
JUST NOTICED THE NO FLAMES WARNING,
but its true...

Also, no warning on this chapter...

WAA THIS STORY SUCKS YU SPELLED MINITE WONG WAA
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
You put a character death warning on a Hunger Games fan fiction.
Are you serious?
Killua Zoldyck chapter 10 . 12/15/2012
Warning: Constructive Criticism.
Your grammar is off, but only because you substitute similar words like there and their. (Their sticks are over there, and they're dancing! XD(You're on your roof!)) So yeah. Also, Ed has automail, not automale, and don't put together two words or separate one (I can't stand this anymore! Any more, and you're dead! XD)Anyways, your story's great. Keep posting!
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