Reviews for The Alchemist's Game
Tethriot chapter 8 . 2/6
I'm sorry, but I just can't go on. The characters seem blatantly OOC, and the fact that you feel like Ed would ever reveal such a secret like his alchemy was the final straw.

-Tethriot.
theWolfiestWolfA chapter 1 . 7/21/2014
theWolfiestWolfAlive
There's something up with my yahoo account and I forgot my fanfic password, so until that's resolved, I'm just going around reading stuff.

I really like the way this is playing out, but there are a few spelling and grammar errors. nothing major. (my personal opinion) sometimes its better if the story doesn't fall together too conveniently.
Moceous-Ketsu chapter 14 . 11/27/2013
I enjoyed it alot the thought of rue living excites me alot. Now its getting interesting. I cant wait to read part 2. More full metal characters would be awesome. The thought of Katniss and Hawkeye back to back in the capitol shooting capitol soldiers excites me. But well see. Good stuff good stuff.
Moceous-Ketsu chapter 2 . 11/27/2013
I am Seriously digging this story i think you got ed spot on. I'm looking forward to someone calling him short in the games i hope to hear more from you keep up the good work
wishfulliving89 chapter 14 . 10/18/2013
love the story very well written. so love this ending better then the movie/book version of it, cry when rue got kill.
Fi Suki Saki chapter 14 . 9/5/2013
Oh...!
That's... Unexpected a nice ending...!

Really nice! Though failed, but still nice! ;)
Guest chapter 4 . 8/1/2013
I liked the second part better because of the strajistic planning
SakuraDreamerz chapter 5 . 7/30/2013
*snickers* Im thinking the District 6 male insulted him XD.
And I think I know the perfect short rant for Ed to say:
Ed: "WHO ARE YOU CALLING SO SMALL YOU WANNA CRUNCH HIM LIKE AN ANT?!"
Anywho, this is getting really good! :D
Guest chapter 3 . 1/5/2013
EDWARD Y U NO SECRETIVE :'(
Guest chapter 2 . 1/5/2013
JUST NOTICED THE NO FLAMES WARNING,
but its true...

Also, no warning on this chapter...

WAA THIS STORY SUCKS YU SPELLED MINITE WONG WAA IM A WHINY BORED ASSHOLE
Guest chapter 2 . 1/5/2013
JUST NOTICED THE NO FLAMES WARNING,
but its true...

Also, no warning on this chapter...

WAA THIS STORY SUCKS YU SPELLED MINITE WONG WAA
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
You put a character death warning on a Hunger Games fan fiction.
Are you serious?
Killua Zoldyck chapter 10 . 12/15/2012
Warning: Constructive Criticism.
Your grammar is off, but only because you substitute similar words like there and their. (Their sticks are over there, and they're dancing! XD(You're on your roof!)) So yeah. Also, Ed has automail, not automale, and don't put together two words or separate one (I can't stand this anymore! Any more, and you're dead! XD)Anyways, your story's great. Keep posting!
Guest chapter 6 . 12/15/2012
This was definitely worth reading! Though there is something that bugs me: you use words that sound the same as the one you mean, but aren't actually what you mean. This time there's been 'starring' when it should've been 'staring,' 'manor' when it should've been 'manner,' and 1-2 more. Other than that, this is perfect (especially since I don't like any other HG/FMA X-overs ;P. They all strike me as unrealistic and kinda badly written)!
usachan chapter 10 . 11/9/2012
Simon the mountain man ends at a kind of sad spot, doesn't it? XD I love this story! Ed lost his automail?! OH MY GOD! WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NOW?!
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