|Reviews for Shades of Gray|
| charie01 chapter 6 . 2/25/2012
Oh wow! Great description of Obi-wan's 'trip'. The force wasnt very helpful after all. And now he's addicted! Throw Anakin in the mix and we've got some wicked drama! I hope your next chapter is ready to go up soon. This is such fun:) thank you for writing:)
| Pretentious Procrastinator chapter 5 . 2/25/2012
Well Obi-Wan's getting closer and closer to Lenn!The conditions in the mine are going to effect Anakin so much...
| Viviane Renard chapter 5 . 2/24/2012
Sneaking Obi-Wan! Already worming his way to the top of security. I don't know what's more dangerous for Obi-Wan-an overly friendly Uun, or one that's angry at him for rejecting and then upstaging her.
Thanks for updating so fast! Keep it up.
| charie01 chapter 5 . 2/24/2012
Great chapter. He's in with the boss now. Can't wait for more:) thanks for writing:)
| Viviane Renard chapter 4 . 2/23/2012
"All right, you're qualified," he grudgingly admitted. "But I've never heard of you before."
"Good," Ben replied. "I'm glad I haven't left any loose ends lying about."
Obi-Wan is so cool! I can see him saying that line with a straight face. Great chapter, and I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next.
| Pretentious Procrastinator chapter 4 . 2/23/2012
I haven't checked my email for a while do I wasn't aware you'd updated, but I'm sure glad I did!Very interesting developments so far, really enjoying it. Just wondering how Obi-Wan will deal with the unwanted attention...
| LadySaxophone chapter 4 . 2/23/2012
Creepy forshadowing to Darth Vader in the first part...ugh
This addition of Anakin doesn't bode well for Obi Wan's cover does it?
| charie01 chapter 4 . 2/23/2012
Anakin is going to blow Obi-wan's cover isn't he?... I'm on the edge of my seat for all the nasty things Obi-wan is going to be 'forced' to do. More soon please! Thanks for writing:)
| Viviane Renard chapter 3 . 2/21/2012
Great start! You've really captured the characters well, and I love the political intrigue. I can't wait to see what shenanigans Obi-wan gets into while he's undercover, especially once Anakin enters the mix!
| Kenji Hyuga White tiger chapter 3 . 2/21/2012
Hee hee! Interesting!
| charie01 chapter 3 . 2/21/2012
Hehehe...I am loving it! Obi-wan has his work cut out for him in this. He thinks he can handle the drugs... And the female. Why do I think you are going to prove different?lol I'm so excited to see what happens next! ASAP please(also love the character Master Sinube) you crack me up. Thanks for writing:))))))
| Irene Djo chapter 3 . 2/21/2012
I'm thrilled with this already.
""Lovely." Still, he was fairly certain he could handle the ill effects – if he were careful and stayed centered in the Force. Sacrifices had to be made. His treacherous memory flickered back to that one occasion, in Qui Gon's company, on – but no. He would rather not think about that."
CAN WE PLEASE SEE THIS IN A SHORT AT SOME POINT? Obi-Wan and QG's run in with hallucinogens? Yes please!
The Force shimmered about her like a reflection trembling in water. She was somehow not right, and she worked for Lenn. This was his lead, then. The key to Lenn's inner circle. "That's…why I'm here," he improvised, with a tiny grimace.
Laughed out loud at this.
Thanks for the update. Pumped about more.
| quesse.beryl chapter 2 . 2/21/2012
I just wanted to compliment you on your attention to detail. Things like aurodium from The Cloak of Deception and the frieze in Palpatine's chambers from the commentary on Episode III. I'm sure there are many more which I am missing, but it's always a thrill of pleasure when I see references to obscure star wars lore. Thanks for that!
As always, appreciative of your continued writing.
| Kenji Hyuga White tiger chapter 2 . 2/20/2012
Hmm, interesting, this could be leading somewhere fun. Nice chapter, makes me hate sidious even more.
| Pretentious Procrastinator chapter 2 . 2/20/2012
Yay another chapter!I read this yesterday but didn't have time to review, so I came back today and have been pleasantly surprised!Please update again soon, really enjoying it.