|Reviews for Until the End|
| Gurgicalcipher chapter 3 . 6/5/2012
Thank you for the update!
| Leese chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
You write Earthian very well. Good first chapter. Nice to see just 1 or 2 spelling mistakes. Grammar and dialogue is well done. Stick to what you know. :-)
| Gurgicalcipher chapter 2 . 2/27/2012
Really good story. Can't wait for the next chapter
| slytheringirl3865 chapter 2 . 2/27/2012
Awww was i really the only reviewer? lol that kind of sucks, but... THIS STORY IS AWESOME! lol i am glad i gave you the courage to keep writing, because this chapter is better than the last one :D
there is one thing i saw wrong, when they are about to get it on, and chihaya says, "what if some calls."
did you mean what if someONE calls?
lol but that's just a pet peeve of mine, so no need to fix it or anything :D im pretty sure i am the only person that would catch that :P
please keep up the great work!
| slytheringirl3865 chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
Awesome beginning! I'm glad you decided to write an earthian fic, there's not many out there :-) can't wait for the next chapter!