|Reviews for if i was young, i'd flee this town|
| Mistress of Solitude chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
when jade whispers "you can have him" "just stop this" my heart melts.
and when she continues softly "tori, he will love you, just stop" i think my melted heart disintegrated. because honestly, that tori is killing herself because she loves beck, kills me.
but you just wrote this so beautifully.
that i couldn't help but fall in love with tori and her sick obsession in this story.
and the last two lines; "you aren't beautiful anymore" he whispers. zero. it just awed me into a stupor.
i love this. very much.
| Explicitly Simple chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
how emotional :o ! It was really good. I was near crying at the end ! I love how you slowly described it as a problem & how perfection isn't always perfect. :) Great job !
| Jeremy Shane chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
| theghostqueen chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
Great story! Very well-written, I love the style. I loved the awesomely abrupt ending. Keep writing!:-)
| past decembers chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
God, that was just...amazing.
And I didn't think the ending was weird - I actually thought it was perfect. xP I honestly have no idea why this didn't get any reviews.