|Reviews for 2 Girls 1 Cup|
| Horace Nihil chapter 3 . 3/5
THAT, my dear sir, is the closest thing to the mother of all (allegedly intentional) WTFs I've ever read.
(And I've been into HP fanfiction for quite a while)
Loved it !
| X-elemental chapter 2 . 10/22/2013
...Just because they're girls/turned into girls doesn't mean they should verbally and sadistically torture their friends and lovers, publicly humiliate the innocent bystanders to the extent of a chemical weapon or set them up for gang rape with animal(s), just to hurt someone they dislike. Not hate for a good reason, dislike.
You didn't avoid character growth, but I've read dark!HarryxVoldemort fics which Harry isn't even half as dark. By sentences alone, even when Harry kills the whole Weasley family it would be 'lighter'.
Oh , and Luna is like a poor attempt at replicatorbot.
| RedRyder01 chapter 3 . 8/18/2013
Actually a really good read that needs more
| BlueEyedBrigadier chapter 3 . 8/17/2013
Holy...schneikes! This was totally nucking futs and I loved it! Your powers of absurdist and toilet humour astound and amaze!
| BlueEyedBrigadier chapter 2 . 8/17/2013
You have once again done the impossible, Luan Mao...you actually exceeded the amount of toilet humour in Part 1 without completely losing the fine sense of humour this story has developed! Fantastic!
| BlueEyedBrigadier chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Oh wow...you have achieved something I thought impossible. I honestly don't know if I should praise you or shame you, Luan Mao ;P
But really, this was hilarious! Heavily focused on bodily fluids and functions, but hilarious!
| sekmarcspn chapter 3 . 8/17/2013
That was hilariously horrible! Thank you! Happy Writing!
| FreelanceBum chapter 3 . 4/29/2013
I misread Harry turning back into a dude, and thought the baby was a metamorphamagus. How silly of me.
| FreelanceBum chapter 2 . 4/29/2013
This relationship with Colin is amazing.
| Fullmetal11791 chapter 3 . 4/24/2013
"The shocking part was, well, Luna. "I'm a Black through my grandmother and I've inherited a family trait. I am a metamorphmagus, though I can control only one or two things because I've only got a little Black in me." Luna shifted before Harri's curious and then surprised and then awestruck eyes. "And now you're going to get a little Black in you." It wasn't so little. And it was a good thing she'd put up silencing charms. And it was a good thing Harri was on top of Colin, for padding. Luna liked it rough. "You might as well get used to it. Once you go Black, you never go back."
OMG ahahahahahahahahahaha aha!
And the neon green dildo in the tea cup! I was laughing so hard I almost woke people up!
| Fullmetal11791 chapter 2 . 4/24/2013
This went from disturbingly funny to horrifying very quickly. Not so sure I want to read chapter three lmao.
| Silent Avid Magma chapter 3 . 4/10/2013
This was disturbingly fantastic.
Thanks for writing.
| Covante chapter 2 . 4/10/2013
They are dancing inappropriately so McGonagall kicks them out of the supervised Great Hall to go off somewhere else, together? That's a mighty fine example of Hogwarts discipline right there.
| Raved Thrad chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
It seems unfair to label this a crack fick. At the very least, this is a crack fic on crack. It certainly cracked me up.
| TharzZzDunN chapter 3 . 12/14/2012
Weird and creepy, but still oddly fun. Keep up the Lovegood style!