Reviews for How The Other Half Lives
Wwwwhhhhhyyyyy chapter 9 . 5/4/2015
It's May please update befor my birthday which is about a week away.
Troll chapter 8 . 4/19/2015
Ignore the post befor wrong author but love your stuff by the way.
Troll chapter 9 . 4/19/2015
Hey dude don't get down about the pine trees they can't change who they are.
Kimori Takahashi chapter 9 . 4/12/2015
Oh am loving this!
Please update soon!

When/If Danny goes ghost, who would see or catch him? What about the ghosts in amity?
Son of Zeus0001 chapter 9 . 4/9/2015
Overall, this was really good. I only spotted two noticeable mistakes. First, every so often you'll slip back and forth between past and present tense. While it doesn't happen too often, it is kind of jarring when it does. Second, the timing seems a bit off. Somehow Sam's argument over brunch lasts as long as Danny's entire day. It... it comes across as kind of weird. Other than that though, the chapter was quite good. I enjoyed Sam's verbal sparring match with Rex. Her arguments were well thought out and well-timed. And it's nice to see a bit of Danny's reckless side jumping to conclusions every so often.
jim89 chapter 8 . 3/18/2014
Pretty good chapter nice feel but there is one tiny problem.
Sam let the hell up on Valerie. She's not being selfish is not throwing you under the bus. She gently trying to
be caring, considerate friend. You seem to go out of your way to give her crap. Even admitted on your way out
your date that. Valerie was trying to show she cared. Hell jazz acted the same way and did not give her crap.

stop being so damn stubborn and get over it and trust Valerie already.

Furthermore Danny isn't yours, you act like you own him. And no one else has the right to be with him.
You never told him how you feel or made your move. If you're not going to do it. You no right to stop
anyone else from making their moves on him also second you ever stop to consider that Danny's feelings are.
Have you ever asked him. She never even considered that Danny might not feel the same way.
IT Not right for him and not right you.

So I hope, that next big Sam chapter, Sam finally have a talk with Valerie this is working the stuff out.
So far jazz Valerie and Danielle getting along. Sam needs to get with the program

We shall see
Izi Wilson chapter 8 . 3/18/2014
So, what's Danny's psi power?
jim89 chapter 7 . 3/17/2014
Things are coming along nicely here, he still feels Danny and company have been dropped straight into the deep
end here you're right is more going on here. Then they've been told.

Danielle's will need some serious help, if you have her move around the school freely I suggest you get her
student ID and a uniform least she could blend in. Keep Danielle hiding in the room might get old after a while.

Good job on Danny finally noticing. Sam's feelings. I have a story where he's not interested and Sam. Romantically
without Sam being tossed under the bus. Make a new Danny pairing happened.

As for Valerie. She's been nothing but kind Sam and straight up and honest. She might to work on her presentation
not the most tactful way of putting things. Sam's jealousy and hurt feelings over the red Huntress/ Phantom thing
are clouding judgment with Valerie. The two need to work through the differences soon. Everyone's trying to keep
Sam rage outburst on Valerie which she doesn't deserve. And causing an awkward situation.
I can really see Valerie called Sam out on that crap leading to some nasty problems

Also, when Sam and Valerie competition happens could also go immediately worse. By Danielle happens to be
in Valerie's body making Sam a monster as she rips Valerie/Danielle a new one for no reason.
Sending Danielle fleeing into away crying.

Either way things are getting interesting

We shall see
Son of Zeus0001 chapter 7 . 3/14/2014
Was Shiro a reference to the Dresden Files?

Update soon! This chapter was amazing as always!
Izi Wilson chapter 7 . 3/13/2014
Wait I'm confused. What power does Tucker have?
John Blake chapter 7 . 12/29/2013
Please update soon. I can't wait for the next chapter!
astro-.-luvr10 chapter 7 . 10/22/2013
Interesting story
Son of Zeus0001 chapter 6 . 6/22/2013
Please update. This story is awesome!
Fuckingqueenofhell chapter 6 . 5/1/2013
:D
Guest chapter 6 . 2/25/2013
I read this story when it first showed up and then lost track of it. I actually forgot about it when you didn't update in such a long time. It remains my favorite AU DP fic out there. So... THANK YOU FOR UPDATING! :D

Update SOON!
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