|Reviews for My Dragon, My Love|
| hana chapter 24 . 2/20
hmm. wonder if harry will get pregnant too.
| lisa.francis.96780 chapter 5 . 1/28
This harry is really ticking me off. No means no not keep going. Even if he eventually stopped. Losing your head is no excuse.
| mrs moonie chapter 5 . 10/24/2013
Like your story, but it's pissing me off that Ginny has hit Draco twice! and he has yet to knock her on her $$!
When is somebody gonna show her she just can't put her hands on another person because, they did, said or is something she doesn't like?
They do a spell to give her stinky farts for a week when she returns to school.
Anyway good story so far. I will continue reading.
| Mashkai30 chapter 24 . 5/24/2013
Wonderful story! Thanks for sharing!
| SanValentino chapter 24 . 4/30/2013
That last chapter was uncalled for...
| HarryPotterAlways11 chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
| LunarFay chapter 19 . 3/12/2013
Ok so I wanted to review at the end but omg, really? Wouldn't we've snapes baby only be like seven months? He was only two weeks when he was kidnaped. & I'm sure Draco would be 9 months along because he was at 3 when he was kidnaped.
I'm also thinking Remus is 7-8 months along . . . you really need to have a time like when writing to reamber what you say & when things would happen.
Oh & about Ginny, if she had been made to join lord voldy by Ron then she was doing something under deures. She would not be charged so sevialry for 2 reasons, her life was threatened & she is under age.
A little bit of a stretch there.
& really? All 3 at the same time? (not that all of them having kids was not bad enough) but a little much don't you think?
Anyway the plot is lovable, & Ron broke my heart, I wish it was Ginny & not him. :( I wana hug Draco so much!
For the most part I loved this, it's a fun read-
Oh ya & dear your writing style is really enjoyable except one thing.
You write novel like but sometime you just say a name after a phrase like a play. There are words you use to discribe that somone spoke. - said, gasped, growled, hissed, barked, stated, groaned, moaned, argued, questioned, asked, answered, reapplied, wined, wondered out loud, sassed, mumbled, muttered, whispered - & many more if you look around or think hard enough. I hope that helps you improve. Adding these after a comment gives the words emotion. Helps you set a tone.
Ex: "he is fine" Harry. (could mean anything emotionally, feels kind of dull)
"he is fine," Harry wined. (pestered, bothered, irritable"
"he is fine," Harry barked. (angry, snappy)
"he is fine," Harry sighed. (tired, worn out, exhosted)
see how each one gave you a different feels.
| Drarry4eva chapter 24 . 3/10/2013
Amazing story. Can't wait to read the sequel.
| Drarry4eva chapter 5 . 3/10/2013
Ron should realize that if he were any type of friend to Harry that he'd support his decision to be with Draco no matter what. He really isn't being a true friend. But I do love a good Ron/Ginny bashing.
| Drarry4eva chapter 2 . 3/10/2013
Yeah, Ron tends to spit things out before thinking if he should. I despise homophobia and anyone who is. I'm not a lesbian but I cannot associate with someone who hates a person because of their sexuality. But I am enjoying this so far, so I am going to continue reading.
| Joshua Primrose chapter 10 . 1/29/2013
I don't normally review in the middle of a story, but this gem had me in tears of laughter.
"I-I…I was walking back to the Great Hall…when Lavender pushed me into the wall and started hitting me with Ginny."
I just can't get the image out of my head of Ginny being used as a weapon by Lavender *snort*.
| Punk Rocker Arashi chapter 24 . 1/4/2013
Quite interesting. I liked it. I'm off to see what else you could have possibly written.
Keep up the good work.
| dolhpin33 chapter 24 . 11/9/2012
| BabyGurl20 chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
| EmilyGail chapter 19 . 6/22/2012
I've really been enjoying this story. The plot has been very good! This kind of OOC is my favorite. I thought I would just point out a hole in the story.
I haven't read the other reviews, so someone might have already pointed this out, but wasn't it stated earlier in the story that male pregnancies were only 6 months long? And Draco was already 3 months along, so skipping 6 months in the future would have skipped the birth of the baby.