|Reviews for Lips of an Angel|
| flashbak1 chapter 12 . 3/4
You better update ASAP. I've been waiting for a long time
| kittyhawk09 chapter 12 . 2/7
Very interesting. I look forward to reading more. Your newest reader,
| InfiniteDreamz chapter 12 . 1/5
This is actually a great story! I wish you could've make it longer though.. Grammar and spelling is all-good so there's nothing to worry about. By the way, take as long as you need to update this awesome story cos its worth waiting :)
HOPE YOU HAVE AN UPDATE SOON! :DDD
| lioncousin chapter 12 . 1/4
So far I believe this whole story is very well done. It is a shame you don't believe you'll be able to write a sequel, this story of yours has a very good amount of favorites and follows and I believe a sequel would turn out to be successful as well. Like you previously mentioned however not everything goes according to plan. Good luck and looking forward to the final chapter
| Guesty chapter 9 . 11/11/2013
It's called a mallet. The thing judges use.
| Guest chapter 12 . 11/7/2013
| Judge Kuma-san chapter 12 . 11/6/2013
PLEASE WRITE AN EPILOGUE! I know I'm asking too much, but please write an epilogue about this story! This story is amazing!
| DualStarduster chapter 12 . 11/6/2013
That's creepy... I feel like it's a joke though. Like they are texting him but in real life that'd be difficult... I want to try that now.
| monkeyqueen88 chapter 12 . 11/6/2013
This is really good and take as much time as you need and um plezzzzzzzzzzz do a sequel
| m16m203 chapter 12 . 11/6/2013
please reconsider not writing a sequel ths is on of my favourits to read
| Midnight-Live chapter 11 . 10/1/2013
i didn't sign in! anyways, WHATS THIS ABOUT THE LAST CHAP? THIS STORY IS SO GOOD, i feel like squealing like Hatsune! i love how the awesome girls like Yurippe, Hisako, Yusa and angel are all in her, DONT FORGET SHIINAAA!
story is awesome!
| Jonathan chapter 11 . 8/12/2013
Really great story ;) and i honestly like all the drama and the descriptive language
| Sydney chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
I CANT WAIT BUT please make the sequel after and put it on CH 13 or after what chapter bc im dieing to know \(_\) and this ch was AWESOME IF NO ONE SAID THIS I THANK YOU VERY MUCH
| Ascarde chapter 11 . 7/21/2013
Read this in one go. Firefox decided to crash on me and delete my entire review, and... damn it all. The juices were flowing, I was full on in my reviewer persona and now it's all gone. Fuck. Okay, let's start from the beginning.
For a slice of life story, it seems fairly well done. The grammar and spelling are all pretty good. However, this is offset by the personal interjections of you. Don't digress for even a single line about what you'd do to Kanade if she decided to sleep in your bed. I'm sure none of us want to know.
Speaking of Kanade, that's another issue I'm having. Your making her much too emotional right now. I get that we don't know how long the epilogue took after the end of the story, but she's never been the emotional type. Hell, even when they were saying their final goodbyes she didn't show much emotion. You're making Kanade, to me at least, like a hybrid of Yuri and Yui.
Yuri. Her leaning back and deciding to act all mysterious isn't like her. She'd be right up in Yuzuru's face, asking stuff like "Why don't you recognize me?" not cryptically answering his questions. Yes it might be a figment of his imagination, but even then, Yuri made a pretty lasting impression on him. I'm sure that he'd remember her personality if he remembered all the others.
The others. What happened to them? So far we've seen glances of Yuri, Hinata and Yui with occasional spotting of GirlDeMo. What about the other, I dunno, like fifteen other members? Shiina, Noda, the others? You can't just write them off; they also made pretty good impressions on Yuzuru and Kanade.
However your characterization seems pretty good, except for the aforementioned issues of Yuri and Kanade. Combined with relatively long chapter lengths make me fairly satisfied. Brush up on your characterization first, however.
| Jimmy Y chapter 11 . 7/18/2013
Thank you sooo much!
it is because you have brightened my day with this awesome story...
well truthfully i have been reading this fan fic for a couple of months already so it's not really that exciting, but it still is...
especially because of how cute Kanadechan can be! (KAWAII) /*U*/
anyways not to dissapoint you or anything, but i found a few mis-grammars and spaces that needed words in it. ( I'm just sayin')
wish i could participate in this poll thingy, but same as i here... EXTREMELY BU$Y!
But i do hope you have the next chapter or scene in soon.
I'll be waiting!...FOREVER! (echoes)
and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever! _