|Reviews for For the Greater Good|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/12
boo fuck u dip shit don;t update
| chain.reader chapter 1 . 2/7
It's so badly written it is not worth the bytes it takes.
| roanoak chapter 4 . 8/2/2016
Proving once again why Hermione would make a great dark lady "for your own good"
The big question is how well are they going to get along with TIM
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/23/2016
Did you forgot that Hogwarts has astronomy classes and diagon alley shops has model galaxies and solar systems
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2015
please hermione can create potions better than harry or did you forgot the chapter where harry produced beozar to slughorn read that carefully and you will know
| MoonBurner chapter 1 . 9/18/2015
This is a fantastic story idea, totally original, but the story is utterly lacking in grammar and presents almost every line with broken English. Sentences are missing one or two words such that, while the meaning is clear, the flow is very disjointed. All in all, I hope very much that the chapters can one day be modified for better reading, and the story continued. Good luck.
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/14/2015
okay dude did you ever read harry potter books they have astronomy classes and in diagon alley there are models of galaxy are sold and they know what a planet is. So thank you very much for not continuing this stupidity anymore
| Brian1972 chapter 4 . 2/1/2015
Ah man why do interesting Fics have such a tendency to get abadoned?
| Tylerst chapter 3 . 1/14/2015
Literally just pure pointless bashing of everyone / making Hermione a bitch for no real reason. Random plot points retconned from nowhere. OOC everyone without any good reason. Grammar is bad - most obviously in Ron's lines. Harry is even MORE of a pussy than in canon which is quite the feat. I'm impressed. Its like you had a check box of what not to do in a fic.
| falseproffitt chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
the theme for the story is good enough but did you really have to turn them so dark. I mean you have to people who are known for there compassion and fight for others rights and you stick to that but seem to be oblivious to the fact that your Harry and Hermione are acting worse than most pure bloods.
| nezrel chapter 4 . 8/5/2014
Awesome story idea, never seen anything innovative like it. Instead of melding two different universes together into crossover to make a believable story, you choose to create damn good background for all the characters involved and set them into universe where they create their own adventure.
The 'scientific' character development of Harry and Hermoine is something new and very appreciated.
My only wish is that this story would be continued and not abandoned as it.
| ice chapter 4 . 7/15/2014
good story to read and wonder if there will be any new chapters for the story.
| Philosophize chapter 4 . 7/15/2014
Please don't abandon...
| iceland chapter 4 . 5/28/2014
good story to read and wonder what happens next.
| gaul1 chapter 4 . 5/2/2014
good chapter, byes