|Reviews for Armored Core: Renaissance|
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/19/2012
| MrMasher chapter 3 . 6/23/2012
Very nice for a first few chapters! Interesting characters with a nicely flowing story. You made AC combat seem fluid and it works :) Keep it up!
| kyub3y14 chapter 2 . 3/3/2012
I'm very impressed with this fic. Normally other stories enemies boosting and shooting at each other continuesly but i love how creative u got with the fights with ACs actually getting into physical combat. Small misspellings but mostly irrelevant. Though I'm not sure how well saying Armored Core repeatedly affects the flow of things i say AC for short would be best but ill leave that to your better judgement.
Cant wait to pick up my copy when it releases.
| Ham chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
Not bad at all. I found myself wanting the privilege of some insights about Sankari. Perhaps even (one or more) flaws. Somewhere inside me, I am symbolically connected to Sankari. In addition to the admirable qualities (grace, stoicism, courage, humility) I want to be allowed to perceive things in ways that are unique to Sankari. You seem to understand how to keep the story moving without getting bogged down with details. Yet, by and large, you provide engaging descriptions