Reviews for Journey Into Paradise
HawkRider chapter 19 . 8/30/2013
Yikes... Poor Luxord... I feel so sorry for him... And he's a character I'm really unsympathetic towards. Well done!

9.5/10
HawkRider chapter 18 . 8/30/2013
Well, I can now confirm that you have two Watchers on dA. I look forwards to reading your work there as well as here. And I don't mind the shortness, it was a well written, cute scene.

9/10
Christopher Scott chapter 19 . 8/5/2013
Wow. The bit with Luxord explaining what happened with Yuffie was depressing. Namine's thoughts on the matter were interesting. Please update as soon as you find most convenient. Truly, Christopher Scott: A Gentleman Thief
Kitsune Ayanne chapter 18 . 8/1/2013
For some reason, I couldn't stop reading this until I got to the last chapter. This is a great story and I was sad that Yuffie was killed... *sob sob* Nonetheless, Sora and Naminé were cute together, and Naminé's nightmare sort of freaked me out a little, but that won't stop me from continuing to read this story! Anyways, I can't wait for the next update

xoxoxo
Lovely
Christopher Scott chapter 18 . 8/1/2013
Great chapter. Once again the emotions were believable. I especially liked how Namine went out of her way to comfort him. I look forward to what is to come. Please update as soon as you find most convenient. Truly, Christopher Scott: A Gentleman Thief
rushninja chapter 18 . 7/31/2013
I don't care if it is short. There is more Sora and Naminé bonding time so what more can I ask for.
Christopher Scott chapter 17 . 7/21/2013
Wow. Great job. I liked how realistic Sora's sorrow at losing his sister so soon was. The promise between the two of them. That last line was interesting. I look forward to what is to come. Please update as soon as you find most convenient. Truly, Christopher Scott: A Gentleman Thief
HawkRider chapter 17 . 7/19/2013
Well, that is certainly a cliff hanger. A really interesting one. I am really looking forwards to see what will happen next.

Poor Yuffie...

9/10 and a note to ask why you took a while, if it is okay.
Sara lovelymusic chapter 16 . 5/3/2013
i... HATE... twilight... aaaaaaggggggg its so STUPID! I mean come on edwards not a vampire HES A FUC*ING PIXY OR FAIRY! STUPID FU*KING VAMOIRES DONT SPARKLE! AND THEY HAVE ABSOLUTLY NO emotion whatsoever i personally think that twilight is a wate of our presiouce time we have left and if anyone disagrees with that... well... lets just say they wont live to tell the tale.. that is IF there alive when im done with them (grins evill)
(back to chery mood im bi polar) anywayyys can you update plz? (skipps off into the sunset)
Christopher Scott chapter 16 . 11/28/2012
Welcome back. The bit with the sparring was sweet. Oh no. Yuffie! Please update as soon as you find most convenient. Truly, Christopher Scott: A Gentleman Thief
HawkRider chapter 16 . 11/27/2012
Yeah, stories where only villains die are often bad. Or for children.

Anyway, great chapter. Very interesting. 9.5/10
Biscuitswhere chapter 15 . 10/6/2012
Man cant wait for the next part! :)
Guest chapter 15 . 8/28/2012
UPDATE THIS
originalworksof chapter 15 . 8/9/2012
You gotta make your chapters longer! Ahem… *clears throat awkwardly* Right, have I reviewed before? If not, I've been stalking this story for a few days now. This is pretty good, but can't you make the chapters longer?
HawkRider chapter 15 . 7/26/2012
Great chapter! And, going from what Spanish I can recall right now, that sound sounded really nice.

9.5/10

Oh, and I would be interested in reading those...
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