|Reviews for Isn't That Hiccup Harrassment?|
| Warlock of the Yuri Coven chapter 1 . 5/5
That was a fun read, I missed the Y-G-O / DBZ references due unfamiliarity (I assume the fighting thing would point to DBZ, just a hunch) but then again I suppose they did not distract from the main dish. Interesting swings from funny to hawt and back again, almost chaotic but kept in line after all. Oddly delighted with Chizuru's ojou-sama laugh, not sure if in character but I had fun imagining it in my head.
Good work overall, and like you mention yourself the status quo oozing back into place is befitting of the source manga. A pity I'm reviewing this so late, looks like you haven't been writing or sharing on site since then which is a bummer. Oh well, never say never!
| Eve5035 chapter 1 . 9/1/2016
that is so dark...
| Evelyn chapter 1 . 12/31/2015
I can't even...
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
"So long, and thanks for all the fish."
This is amazing.
That is all I have to say.
| aqoursruby chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
That was great! It was a very fun read and felt like an actual episode from the anime itself.
And I'm so glad you added Sanae; she made the whole thing more enjoyable.
| bhood13ymail.co chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
I thought this was a very good fanfiction. I would like to see you make another fanfiction on the one free this and keep going. That way you can have new chapters. I actually want to see more ika x eiko. So could you make new ones. My email is the name so email please with your answer
| Zach chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
| mhaza chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
Now that I finally watched the first season, I can read this now! :) It was very cute, but I'm still wondering how old Squid girl actually is? Maybe Eiko really isn't a child molester and Squiddie is a cougar :D
I'm glad that you got Sanae in too! "YOU'RE ONLY ALLOWED TO VIOLATE ME, SQUIDDIE!" XD
| FallenPyramyd chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
This totally felt like a lost episode of Ika Musume (season 1)...
I felt hot, laughed my derriere off, felt hot from reading the tongue action scene, and then laughed again near the end when yuri stalker Sanae (who is my second favorite character) went to their place...
All in all, the way it ended was perfect and funny...Although I do wish that it could have gone more into yuri territory and they would develop into blissful love...
Ah well, maybe next time, eh..? You have a great talent in writing the characters of this show and these two especially...
| The God of Infinity chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
This fanfic is the perfect example of how much fun you can have with a story; especially when the story has not yet been explored from that angle. I for one thought this fanfic was fun to read. Good job!
| angel0wonder chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
This was soooo cute! Wish it had actually went down like this. The Sanae parts made me laugh the most, they were priceless! Especially the part where she runs to their house in her slippers, probably covered in her own blood and foam. XD The picture I think of is quite amusing.
When it got to the kiss, it got so steamy I fogot Chizuru was still in the room too. But I guess they'll just go on like normal (sigh~)
Overall, pretty solid, I think. The cuteness is cute, the romance is romantic, everyone was in-character. T'was great, I liked it! Made me smile goofily throughout _
| MichaelSaniyan chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
If only you knew how sad I was when it turned out I'd missed a HItchhiker's reference. But never mind that, onto the actual story.
You have a well put, simple writing style that fits the kind of comical feel you're going for. Just as fitting is the more painting style you used for the..."intimate" paragraphs. I don't know if these styles necessarily mix well, they are definitely above average by themselves.
As for actual story content, I'll say it amused me. The Sanae parts especially, *cough* blood jet *cough*. Again, it feels a bit like the story was unevenly divided between comedy and romance, and there wasn't enough focus on either part. But the parts are good by themselves, like I said. The comedy is enjoyable and occasional hilarious, and the romance got surprisingly steamy somewhere in there.
That will also be my main advice for this review. Solid story, but try to be more focused next time. There is potential, certainly. And...um, I wouldn't mind if romance was the part you were going to focus on.