|Reviews for Under the Moonlight|
| KyandiX chapter 1 . 3/10
I absolutely loved all of those little moments that just made me fangirl.
"...cradling her like she was the most precious thing in the world to him, and right then she was." Probably one of my favourite moments in this. BUT THIS WAS OVERALL ADORABLE.
I love how you kept his angry/mean demeanor in it, but you also made him care a lot about her. Awuh! c:
I think you wrote this perfectly and if you don't write a sequel, it'd be okay because this is perfect. c:
| Trey palmer chapter 1 . 1/2
Omg plz well all you fans shut up about dott dawn and Scott hate each other
| Freekness X Yaoi chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
WOW! This was really CUTE!
| Soldier Courtney chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
Its a lot better than Scourtney. I like Dott much better. This was really good for a first timer.
| lea.sutherlanddoane chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
| TheSupernova chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Amazing. Absolutely incredible and I want more
| Taylor chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
...XD. Okay. I love Dott.
| Maddie chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
I love the story but I would love a second chapter. Because in the beginning it sounded like Jo and the others followed them to see where they were going. So the second chapter could b them seeing it and being in awe. Plus they could also confront the 2.
| Gianna Sparrow chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
| SLRthechosen chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
Pretty damn good for your first lemon...
| Blood Thirsty Angle chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
This was very good and well written. I don't think anyone was out of character at all. I agree that Scott would probably rub off on her. We all influence people in one way or another. I don't like the in your face relationships like Mike and Zoey, though they are good characters. Well done anyway and I hope you write more in the future
| A-chanTheGreat chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Ooh la la freakin' la, not bad for your first Lemon! I LUVED IT! :3
And I LOVE Dott!
| Ultrabot Ultimus The Hedgehog chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
Nice...well written,good story,great in every way...
| iiCookiee chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
Bad? You Must Be Out Of Your MIND! This Is The Most Romantic Thing I've Ever Read About Dott! It May Seem Kind Of Gross To Some People, But Definitely Not To Me! This Was Great, You Should Do More Things Like This, People Would Totally LOVE That! You Did A Really Good Job, This Is Like 10000000 Miles Away From Terrible. Loved It!
| The7WolvesO'Silence chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
WHAT THE FUDGE R U TALKING ABOUT
That was absolutely adorable and I'm positive that Dawn would have kept Scott from being mean
Keep up the good work