Reviews for Trickster Interruptus
Kimmytrainer chapter 1 . 12/3/2017
The hell XDDD
GrumpyCat503 chapter 1 . 12/23/2016
That's cute
Cellis chapter 1 . 10/15/2016
Hehehe Loki forgot where he'd placed his spare Cape. Brilliant
Marrilyn chapter 1 . 9/21/2016
This is hilarious. I can kinda see Loki pulling shit like this.
Missingwings chapter 1 . 3/4/2016
And this is why I love Loki. This was perfect! Well done Loki, forget where your clothes are (Why not just use magic to clean it?). Great job on this!
Martisz chapter 1 . 3/1/2016
Loki's priorities. I love it.
halfcatvampire chapter 1 . 12/2/2015
I don't see why the creature couldn't have been kept as a pet. I mean it listened to Loki pretty well, though magic was also used, and Loki must have known something about it. Yet I digress, this was a hilarious fic.

I heart the Hitachiin twins chapter 1 . 9/22/2015
I love that he has a SPARE cape, like, I could clean this with magic but NOPE!~
Saskatcheran chapter 1 . 8/28/2015
Certainly humorous.

However, if I may, I would like to critique this piece.

The grammar in the beginning was a bit unprofessional. There were a few "it's" thrown in places that should have contained "its."
ex: its skull (or something like that)

The sentence structure could be more refined. Compound and composite sentences often make a piece sound much more sophisticate than simple sentences.

There was one comma splice run-on sentence that I noticed. I don't quite remember which one it was, but there were two independent clauses in one sentence that weren't connected by a conjunction or pivot.

Loki was a bit out of character, but since it was for the purpose of your fic, it's okay. It was also very dialogue heavy and could use fewer "he replied," "he said"s.

Other than that, I think the story was nicely humorous and entertaining.
Anon chapter 1 . 8/27/2015
So cute! :)
Nikki Pond chapter 1 . 7/4/2015
Typical Loki to ignore or seem rather not bother at all, when there is danger around, all Loki had to do is read. :P Hehehehe
thewriterstory chapter 1 . 6/13/2015
That was funny indeed XD
angelotaku99a99taioAZ chapter 1 . 4/28/2015
ehhhhh? WDF?
Whispers in the Void chapter 1 . 4/9/2015
Loki is just BAMF, no doubt about it! This was really funny, thanks much for writing it :)
Maikle E. Blackwood chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
You interrupted a battle and took down a monster just like that... to ask about your cape?

Good lord, Loki is hilarious!
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