Reviews for Between a Contest or a Relationship
kevinmcwanky chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
To all the people who are telling me about how I made them get the black belt in less than 1 year, SORRY FOR WRITING IT THAT WAY. I don't know anything about MMA or karate, and when I searched on Google for it, it was mentioned that someone got a black belt in 8 months, so I wrote it that way.
Lina chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
Black belt in less than one year... Riiiiight! Just like that you kill the story for me because of lack of realism... Too bad, the idea was interesting but underdeveloped! And 615 participants in one day? Crazy! Maybe you could re-work on the idea by adding more details and by being more realistic?

Keep writing!
Me chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
A black belt within a year? right... I've been practising karate for 3 years now and I'm only a blue belt. I like the idea that Kurt practises Karate, though :)
Jane chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
Loved it! :) I was the anon who asked for this story and it was freaking amazing! :) Great Job. :)