Reviews for Asleep on the window
KKotss chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
i was really good i liked it alot
Soozie Quixotic chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
Describing a character through the eyes of a random outsider is a cool idea-I don't think I've read an Avalon fic like this before. It's pretty in-character, although Adriane actually liked heavy music in canon, iirc. The narrator is really strange, almost robotic-sounding, and seems really impressed with things that aren't too unusual (at least in my experience, plenty of girls have good posture, don't wear makeup, listen to chill music, like dark clothes, etc.). Anyway, I like this fic. It's interesting to see a familiar character from the perspective of a narrator who's kind of detached from reality.