|Reviews for Run Away|
| xXimmortalXx chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
| The Cretin chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
Hun, this is not flaming but I'm gonna tell you what I find good and what I find wrong. Pro- You're writing a story about something few other writers tackle. That proves that you're willing to go into dangerous territory which can turn out good...but proceed with caution. I've seen others do stupid things and mess their stories up. Now, the Con- You're gonna have to work on your grammar skills. Names need to be capitalized. Also, learn to expand on your ideas. I suggest finding a beta. Do some research as well. Learn from "seasoned" writers on this site. Hope I've been of help and I hope I've haven't hurt your feelings. I just wanna be honest. Remember, there's not technically anything such as a bad writer, only bad results. If it doesn't work, try again. Good luck and keep rockin. Best in life to you.