|Reviews for One Step At A Time|
| Citizenofwhoville123 chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
Yeah...so, I read this a while back and forgot to review, but, reading it again, I'm intrigued. Will you cotinue this?
| MintaClaire chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
I like it! This really has potential. The only suggestions I have are that you should make the paragraph breaks a bit larger (because it is easier to focus on the story that way) and maybe change the summary to something slightly less conspicuous. Stating outright who's child he is seems to take away slightly from the mystery of it :P Other than that though, it's really, really good. This is actually one of the few stories including an OC that has held my attention longer that a paragraph. All the other ones I've read get slightly cliche or out of character, but this one is neither of those. It's very original and I'm anxious to see where it is going, so keep it up :D
| FlowerBlossomGirl chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
Sorry, but I can't be bothered to log in. Story so far is good... I am writing a story called The Timelord Trio, please read.