Reviews for Legacy of Despair
Laurie Jupiter chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
This is so touching. I like how you explored what a relationship would be like between PM and the third child. I thought that this was a plausible continuation of his ending in F3AR.
fjeklsnfisodnlkeflns chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
I liked your one-shot. The most interesting part for me was seeing how Point Man, a cold blooded killer and soldier, could fit into society as merely a father figure to one girl. You also utilized some nice one liners to describe characters such as "Even death could not put his soul to rest" for Paxon. It's quite nice to have a feel good moment for F.E.A.R every once in a while. My only critique is that paragraphs can probably be broken up a bit more. Other than that, well done and I hope to see more or your work.
Halo001 chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
i really enjoyed reading this good job