|Reviews for One Torment Too Many|
| GrownUp90s chapter 1 . 6/25
I have to admit, this fic is a guilty pleasure of mine. Your style is excellent, and not overly modern, and your ending is no less plausible than Sonia suddenly falling madly in love with Raskolnikov...honestly I loved the book right up until that ridiculous maudlin ending. Anyway, nice work!
| ThaliaofAvalon chapter 1 . 5/12
This was actually really good. I think you captured the characters pretty well. I just read it recently, and I'm actually writing an essay on how Svidrigailov's actually in love with Dunya, extraordinary, and a good guy at heart. Because basically, nobody believes any of those things... Anyway, yeah, I did actually consider such a pairing. Razumikhin was just too nice to Raskilnokov's family, and if he was into Dunya... Yeah. Nice job.
| Puniful-TeaKat chapter 1 . 3/29
ahhh i totally see it too. Thankfully I'm not alone on that :p this was pretty cute- well, except for the pain and torment, but what would crime and punishment be without it?
| NIKOLAS Kolesnikov chapter 1 . 3/29
I've read this fic like more than 20 times, I can't help it but I've even saved it on my phone so I'm able to read it at least twice in a month. I feel a little prick for did not have commented before since your fic honestly means a lot for me - you know finding RxR fiction isn't an easy mission - but it's like my lack of English language knowledge was scaring me and avoiding me of expressing my love for your work, but I hope you can understand that I'm pretty serious when I say I LOVE this fic.
Please forgive me for being such a silent bitch reader and let me fix my past errors saying how much I love this work of yours!
Thank you so much for writing all these lovely letters for us.
Oh you removed the last part didn't you? I'm happier you did, that was sad as Hell! LOL
Of course that was pretty well written but that was too sad and I don't want to take more gloomy experiences since I get enough reading Soviet novels and living my melancholy life.
| sovietWaffles chapter 1 . 2/9
This is great! I love it. I always expected Razumikhin to slap Rodya upside the head (Rodya was a dick). Yet, I always thought that there was something more in their relationship. Now we just need to add Zossmiov to the mix...
| SteLLaR37 chapter 1 . 1/26
Reading Crime and Punishment right now and shipping it so hard. I mean, when Razumikhin meets Dunya, he literally tells her that she's beautiful and then immediately he tells her that she's a lot like her brother Rodya. I translate that as Razumikhin totally has the hots for Raskolnikov.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2014
oooooooo! sabía que no podía ser solo yo :D, estoy leyendo este libro por el colegio y cada momento que ellos están juntos irradian tensión sexual jajajja por lo menos de parte de Razumikhin, así que me dediqué a buscar alguna historia sobre ellos así que MUCHAS GRACIAS me encantaría que continuaras la historia si es posible :)
| BrownEyedPaloma77 chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
This is... interesting, to say the least. Morever, you have an amazingly smooth writing style; your use of strong verbs, in this particular instance, adds that feeling of tension, it adds unease and elasticity to the atmosphere of your story. Plus, your idea is pretty original. All in all, a job well done! :)
| Emily chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
Oh my god! I was thinking the exact same thing! When I told my AP Lit class that I spent half the book waiting for it to turn into a Razumikhin/Raskolnikov porno they were horrified. But honestly I would have liked the book much better if that's how it turned out.
| Ellstra chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
Whoa, I loved this. In a way I regret this story is so short, because it's pretty amazing. I love every single bit of idea in this and you wrote it very well. It's a pity you didn't write it longer; not about more things but simply longer.
| JenCrocker chapter 1 . 2/19/2014
No, but really, this was fantastic. I absolutely love it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
Thank god I'm not the only one to find this plausible, and almost probable. And-like you- it was one of the only ways I got through the book, I admit the section six was entertaining. You did a great job with character development and twy were in character and I love this
| kimazuikame chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Aha, I knew I couldn't be the only one to ship this! Razhumikin took such care of Raskolnikov! And fit what return? Not even gratitude. I thank you for your contribution :3
| Crazy Cherries chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Omg noo that can't be it! D:
But you're right about the tension (I liked the book though), I was waiting for Dostoevsky to go all Victor Hugo on this pairing but he didn't :'(
Great fic, but why did you end it there D:
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
Ive only come across 1 rxr fanfic other than this, and there seriously needs to be more, imo. This was fantastic, it conveyed raskolnikovs inner conflict very well and i could (almost) see this happening in the actual book because they're both so in character