Reviews for One Torment Too Many
sovietWaffles chapter 1 . 2/9
This is great! I love it. I always expected Razumikhin to slap Rodya upside the head (Rodya was a dick). Yet, I always thought that there was something more in their relationship. Now we just need to add Zossmiov to the mix...
SteLLaR37 chapter 1 . 1/26
Reading Crime and Punishment right now and shipping it so hard. I mean, when Razumikhin meets Dunya, he literally tells her that she's beautiful and then immediately he tells her that she's a lot like her brother Rodya. I translate that as Razumikhin totally has the hots for Raskolnikov.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2014
oooooooo! sabía que no podía ser solo yo :D, estoy leyendo este libro por el colegio y cada momento que ellos están juntos irradian tensión sexual jajajja por lo menos de parte de Razumikhin, así que me dediqué a buscar alguna historia sobre ellos así que MUCHAS GRACIAS me encantaría que continuaras la historia si es posible :)
LaJeuneFilleHilarante chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
This is... interesting, to say the least. Morever, you have an amazingly smooth writing style; your use of strong verbs, in this particular instance, adds that feeling of tension, it adds unease and elasticity to the atmosphere of your story. Plus, your idea is pretty original. All in all, a job well done! :)
Emily chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
Oh my god! I was thinking the exact same thing! When I told my AP Lit class that I spent half the book waiting for it to turn into a Razumikhin/Raskolnikov porno they were horrified. But honestly I would have liked the book much better if that's how it turned out.
Ellstra chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
Whoa, I loved this. In a way I regret this story is so short, because it's pretty amazing. I love every single bit of idea in this and you wrote it very well. It's a pity you didn't write it longer; not about more things but simply longer.
JenCrocker chapter 1 . 2/19/2014
No, but really, this was fantastic. I absolutely love it.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
Thank god I'm not the only one to find this plausible, and almost probable. And-like you- it was one of the only ways I got through the book, I admit the section six was entertaining. You did a great job with character development and twy were in character and I love this
kimazuikame chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Aha, I knew I couldn't be the only one to ship this! Razhumikin took such care of Raskolnikov! And fit what return? Not even gratitude. I thank you for your contribution :3
Crazy Cherries chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Omg noo that can't be it! D:
But you're right about the tension (I liked the book though), I was waiting for Dostoevsky to go all Victor Hugo on this pairing but he didn't :'(
Great fic, but why did you end it there D:
Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
Ive only come across 1 rxr fanfic other than this, and there seriously needs to be more, imo. This was fantastic, it conveyed raskolnikovs inner conflict very well and i could (almost) see this happening in the actual book because they're both so in character
Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
I absolutely agree, and here I thought I was the only one who thought there was something between them.
nataguileral chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
So, I'm in Fanfiction. net, then go to books, then to Crime and punishment. Come on! This is exactly what I was looking for. I also feld that tension, but I have to admit I read to much slash, after a while this starts crawling onto everythin you read. The fic was very good
Akat.No.Sanbi chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Ohhh gdhajf 3 Nope, you're not the only one who felt THAT tension *-* when I read the book Instantly think about the posibility of something between them but I couldn't imagine something with order and fgfagdjf but thiiis, THIIIS, Is AWESOME ;DD
you write so cool -3 I loved it ;w;
why is just one ajgfa - suffering (?)- It was too hilarious for end that fast ;-; ... for me xD
It's REALLY awesome, Thanks for writting it ;3 Hope someday you write more of this 3
Palta chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
OH MY SWEET PIE!
THIS IS SO GORGEOUS
I THOUGHT THAT I WAS THE ONLY ONE WHO SHIP THIS
SO MANY THANKS FOR WRITTING THIS!
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