|Reviews for Naruto the Chimera V2|
| Guest chapter 22 . 10/13
Your storyline is good and very interesting,I noticed some grammar mistakes but hey! No one's perfect but one thing I will criticise is that some of the words in several sentences were missing, like the construction and grammar are perfect but because of the missing words l can't figure out what the sentence means. So,you really need to work on that. Awesome story by the way. LOL.
| my 2 guys chapter 22 . 10/7
that was good keep the chapters coming
| Skywolf99 chapter 22 . 9/12
You keep mixing tenses please stop doing that, i wish that would put the [he/she/it said] after the dialogue, characters are inconsistent with suffixes, you keep adding unnecessary japanese to the dialogue
| s.k.f.f.f chapter 22 . 9/2
| lara5170 chapter 22 . 8/31
I'm have really enjoyed reading this and I am really looking forward to reading more. I'm looking forward to what Aegis says when he finds out about the arrow and what it means. I'm nervous about the next confrontation. Please update before soon because I am very excited
| lara5170 chapter 21 . 8/31
It mentioned in an earlier chapter that there was no mention of an Uzumaki before but that isn't right. I'm hoping Naruto starts to show and share his other abilities with Sasuke so he knows and it doesn't cause a divide which I'm hoping you aren't doing on purpose since both of them have nobody else I like them teaming up together since I have never read a story where they don't part I'd like to see them become closer instead. Naruto did tell Sasuke that he would help him with Itachi and I am looking forward to seeing more of his powers used like his moms chains and that super aggressive power that turned his hair blue and made him super fast and like a berserker mode. He needs to learn how to control it. Is Jaraiya going to become part of Narutos life since he has left him to get fucked up and is supposed to be his godfather
| lara5170 chapter 20 . 8/31
I'm hoping this being the first bloodline that you chose to expose doesn't gross his teammates out or turn him ugly. It's bad enough everyone only seems to see Sasuke. I'm looking forward to them being tested for elements and Naruto having them all and I'm hoping it gives Sasuke and Naruto something to work on together and with Kakashi who wanted to connect with his sensei's kid. I'm really enjoying this story and how it is written. With Naruto surviving Mandas poison and having scales would he have an immunity to poisons?
| lara5170 chapter 19 . 8/31
I'm really hoping Naruto shows some of his hidden kekkai power things to his team finally and I'm wondering when one of them starts to question why he has so many. I'm also curious about Naruto knowing the leaf swirl disappear thingy
| lara5170 chapter 18 . 8/31
So they meet but neither remember each other. The more I read this the more I want to see Sasuke and Naruto become closer and form an unbreakable bond maybe seeing Naruto hurt will cause Sasuke's eyes to awaken and then get stronger. It happened for Itachi when Shisui was killed and again when his mother was killed
| lara5170 chapter 14 . 8/30
What about Kushinas chains didn't he also have that ability? I'm looking forward to seeing his abilities and powers and I believe Sasuke and him could work together. Don't Sasuke and Kakashi also have lightning powers?
| lara5170 chapter 12 . 8/30
I am looking forward to Sasuke or someone learning of his bloodlines so someone else knows it seems odd that a 12 year old would be able to keep this all to himself now that Orenji is gone
| lara5170 chapter 9 . 8/30
I hope if Sasuke finds the truth out from itachi that he shows him the memory of what his mother told him about believing it was the only choice and supporting them
| ivanganev1992 chapter 20 . 8/30
CH 20 for CH 22 What things the book forbid to show and why And when it will show those.
| ivanganev1992 chapter 22 . 8/30
CH 22 Ok ... So maybe multy layerd field with contact Carol seal between the layers to lower the chance for escaping alive the bandits and please save First Haku and hopefully Zaabuza . It they survive Zabuza could help with the water techniques And Haku also .Naruto could maybe do Ice mastery I hope . Something to stabilise Naruto's ... modifications not those seals . What happened to ANKO with her seal ? When the truth for those gifts will be revealed . Will Kuubi would be nicer if she discovered those? She wants strong represant. Why she didn't helped will she be more helpful later . What other things Naruto could unlock ?Better regeneration for his bone attacks Kimimaru could be a teacher. Kimimaru has osteoporosis... KAKASHY wrong bloodvessles are mixed in the connection. And the Snakes like Naruto. So aybe the rebelian forces of the snakes to be with Naruto. And will it be additional one ?What wold it be ?Foxes/Dragons/Chameleon... Lots of possibilities. The random unsigned summoning while is the best way ... There are risks .
| ivanganev1992 chapter 19 . 8/29
CH 19 at least they got actual training.