| Reviews for Portal Time |
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  Gdusbdf chapter 1 . 1/28/2013 This has potential, and i didn't see many spelling or grammar errors. But author, YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED FOR SEVERAL MONTHS! D: |
| Nathanial chapter 1 . 7/11/2012 Too short. |
| Reviews for Portal Time |
|---|
| Gdusbdf chapter 1 . 1/28/2013 This has potential, and i didn't see many spelling or grammar errors. But author, YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED FOR SEVERAL MONTHS! D: |
| Nathanial chapter 1 . 7/11/2012 Too short. |