|Reviews for I Want These Words to Make Things Right|
| Martin-J-Christopher-Freeman chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
| RayenOfDeadStarsAndPlanets chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
Awww so cute! Wonderful!
| bellykaat chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
Delightful as always. I enjoy how you move the relationships forward, whether it's James/Becker, James and/or Becker and the kids, or whoever. I love writers who include dialog in intimate situation, like you do at the end where they are in bed. You do a particularly good job of weaving movement with words. Sometimes, in other writers' stories, I'll be reading along and suddenly the physical orientation between the characters has made an illogical jump and I have to stop and read back to see what I missed. I never have to do that with your stories. Thanks so much for sharing another story in this series!