Reviews for The Moon Heir Part 2 Genesis
DalekDavros chapter 2 . 2/24/2012
Good chapter. Why did Rose not know where Percy's weak spot was when they fought back in book one as they are both the same person? Also did you know that in Native American Plains myth Lightning is an eldritch abomination that can cause insanity when people look at it just think what Zeus Thalia or Jason could do with that. Keep up the good work.
Guess Who chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
You failed to mention Percy's Harem
magicdemi-god223 chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
So this is a summary of the first story? didn't think it was that long... hm... update soon!
yelrac chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
Can't wait to read more!
DalekDavros chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
Good review of the previous story. Also when removing Percy's Achilies curse you missed the chance to have an excellent fight between Percy and a Norse warrior who bathed in dragons blood and was also invulnerable in all but one spot. Also could perhaps that giant snake tooth Percy got from Apophis be made into weapons or a weapon as bones were a long time ago? Keep up the good work.
Umbra8191 chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
great chapter i can't wait for the next update.
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