|Reviews for Bleach: The Raven Angel|
| Litany of Hate chapter 5 . 1/25
Where the hell is your character development? We're seeing a reciprocal thoughts of affection in Chapters 1 and 2, then we move directly into awkward interactions and direct admission of love by Chapter 5 with very little in the way of events precipitating them. There's no tension at all.
This is wish-fulfillment at it's absolute worst. You've dropped IchiRuki into our laps without any effort and didn't even bother to gift wrap it. What this means is that your characters are completely OoC and I never even had a chance to get immersed because of your hamfisted approach. Their starting a relationship has zero impact on me because I'm not invested at all. You haven't made me invested at all, you just handed it over.
If you want an IchiRuki fic, you need to work at it. Even if they are legitimately admitting romantic affection for the other to themselves, they are both incredibly headstrong and stubborn individuals who bicker all the time. You've completely removed this trait from their dynamic without cause and replaced it by them make googly eyes at one another. This is not compelling writing.
Do I even care how Rukia got her powers back? Your characters don't. They're more interested in kissing, because reasons, I guess...
Read a book.
| greasy snivellus chapter 1 . 11/21/2017
this gave me an idea. what if zangetsu and sode went and tried to match their reapers together XD
| carroll.jerry25 chapter 25 . 10/1/2017
most of these stories are the same shit how bout an ichigo that can seal is blade or use kido put some effort into your story seriously everyone exception of a few are all the same old ichigo gaining is power quicker or just inserting someone in where he trains to gain all the power he gains and put chapters in between for the fluff and romance and the jumps right back in you changed up the conan some yes so why don't you or the others also had some twist to the characters power development to it's sad the story is good really it's just personally wish that it can be mixed up some more with characters ability wise
| midnightscar17 chapter 37 . 10/5/2016
| RJKEmpireGirl24 chapter 37 . 8/21/2016
Now this is a good bleach story, I love it especially the ichiruki romance. Please continue the story because this the best one I have read in a while. Great work
| Vi-Violence chapter 37 . 6/7/2016
Awesome! This is a really great fic! I'll be looking forward to your next update!
| draco7347 chapter 37 . 4/24/2016
really love this story cant wait for new chapters
| Kronos chapter 37 . 4/14/2016
| SirDuranix chapter 34 . 3/7/2016
it isn't a swastika it's the kanji for temple
| jokerboy217 chapter 37 . 11/29/2015
WHen is the next chapter? this has been one of my favorite stories for years!
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/30/2015
Dude not bad for your first time its exactly how I pictured ichigo to be with a maidens first tome and also romantic enough for the sappies out there nice man just nice
| NinjaFang1331 chapter 37 . 10/29/2015
| RynUhara chapter 37 . 6/10/2015
I love your detail and just the overall plot!
This is a beautiful fic, and I just can't get enough.
Especially those intimate moments between Ichigo and Rukia.
The love, man. THE LOVE...
| Anissa chapter 36 . 5/20/2015
Please continue to write chapter 38.
| NARUMOKA chapter 36 . 4/27/2015
complete this fanfic now!