|Reviews for Major Hottie and the Sexy Speech Girl|
| ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 1/10
Okay, hopping into your stories . . . you were right, TC would have been too rough, so jumped into this as it was next on the list. You are quite good at the humor. I literally laughed out loud more than a few times. Not just a snicker, but an out and out laugh. These two, nee six, were a hoot and I love how they all got together. The twist of Jasper being Alice's dad was a nice touch . . . sad that she lost her daddy and Edward his best friend. So wonderful of him to step up and be her "father" and the annual father/daughter dance. It warmed my heart right up. This was a lot of fun and really heartwarming. Onto the next . . .
| mybookloveaffair chapter 1 . 12/25/2013
Awwwww so cute lol. I want to meet Majorward 3 ;) Jasper's story made me sad though I think that Edward helping out with and caring for Alice is awesome :)
| archy12 chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
Oh, what an utterly enjoyable story! It made me giggle and snort and get a tiny bit emotional and then soo happy for all of them getting together like a you for having written it.
Edward was adorable.A stutter would have been a good idea too,but this was for the hair,I agree it's criminal to take away the guy's pretty locks,although crew-cut also works well for doesn't, actually? I am looking forward to 'Mission Blacklist'.Um,it seems I have deviated from Edward to Rob-but you know how it is. ;)
| TwiCarrie chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
I have read this before I guess I forgot to review. I loved it then and I loved re reading it today! Off to start another one of your gems :)
| Anita chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
Oh, cute, funny, wonderful, sweet story. Thank you.
| RoryCullen chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
I came across this one when I was parusing your profile for the angsty story - B I - you thought I might of read (I couldn't recall which one you meant and well actually I read several chapters of it when Edward visited Bella from College that first Thanks Giving and then read the last chapter - Edward's wedding - only and decided not to read anymore because it would have been too sad for my tender heart with an ending like that even though I'm sure it was well written)...
ANYWAY... I came across this one and loved it. They are sexy, charming and mature, balancing each other out perfectly. I particularly loved how obviously you are well versed (IMO) in how to write a good one-shot: start with a concise back-story, get to the heart of the matter, without too much fan-fare, and then give it a smart ending that says just enough and yet not too much. Perfect. Thanks.
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| Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
Love it! May have something to do with the fact that I am a speech pathologist!
| twiclare chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
That was lovely, great one shot, thanks.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
that was really GOOD...
| angleface12 chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
This story is absolutely one of the best Military story's I've had the honor to read, thanks for sharing.
| Katy dazzledbythe Cullens chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Oh I just loved this, it was so sweet.
| HerGreenEyesSee chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Lovely one shot. :)
| DeeFC chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Very sweet one-shot! I do so love a man in uniform! Thanks for an enjoyable story.
| nebfan51 chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Great as always BOH! Just found this and enjoyed it immensely...you are talented girl...made me have hope for Shyward; made me tingle; made me feel love for my family; many different emotions in just these few short words! THANK YOU for sharing :)