Reviews for Uzumaki Kombat |
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![]() ![]() This might be very late but I noticed this on wattpad under Naruto Khan. Is that you on wattpad? |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved the omake |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have some of the best story’s on this site keep up the great work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting work keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This... was a work of art. I love it so much. Excellent work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was good if a tad short. I hope you make another Naruto x MK fic. Preferably without Naruhina or Naru sheeva or naru mileena. Not out of hate for the pairings. Mileena could work pretty well I’ve seen. I just cringe a little at the idea of the lemons. And with sheeva I keep picturing futurama. Death by SNU SNU! Lol as to Naruhina while perfectly acceptable and even cute it is also way overdone |
![]() ![]() ![]() All hail Prince Benny. First of his name, successor of Darkness. Hip hip, hooray! Thanks for the read. Glad to know you are planning on rapping it up, nothing brings me more joy in this site than seeing a well done story reach it's conclusion. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Jaodre. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pauvre sasuke et encore kakashi est vraiment bête car il connait la vue des jinrinki et il est naif et encore Naruto le sauve . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jaimerais répondre à l'invité qui a mis son commentaire avant celui la tu est bête et naïf car naruto il a un cote sombre qui d'ailleurs combat mais cela veut dire quil a eu une enfance pas rose . J'avais demandé à un mec qui avait lu et qui lit tjs le mange de savoir si en canon, cad dans le manga papier, on voyait son enfance et la réponse et non, ceci est un fait et tu oublie la mission avec lequipe 7 de zabuza et haku ou naruto dit à tous le monde ce qu'était sa vie et kakashi confirme en disant que cest en gros emrombe de chocolat. Donc dans un monde où naruto se réveille de son masque car il porte un masque qui est d'ailleurs confirmé dans le mange avec yami naruto donc cest toi qui est nul. L'auteur se spécialise dans ce genre d'histoire pourtant tu lis son histoire es-tu masochot ou complètement idiot cela reste a voir. Mais vu que tu n'est pas inscrit tu ne risque rien ou plutôt que tu est un lache. |
![]() ![]() "Garbage chapter 4 . Nov 25, 2015 Seriously? This is fucking terrible. You clearly honor jack-shit about the Naruto-verse so why the hell are you trying to write for it? Every single character in this story was OOC and your Naruto was a douchey Gary-Stu. On top of the absolutely atrocious characters, there was virtually not a single thing that could be labeled as "well written", seeing as your literacy is absolute garbage. All this story is, is a large wish-fulfillment sack of shit for people that have the mental compacity of a gerbil and don't know anything about Naruto outside of the shitty stories they've read on Fanfiction. It's not even just this story. You literally keep perpetuating the same shit over and over and raking in the praise that you don't even deserve. Every single person that says your writing is anything other than complete shit is a fucking idiot that knows nothing about literature. Most of the time your stories double to reinforce how misogynistic you are. Seriously, try writing a story that treats the people Naruto is paired with as something other than a basic sex toy. You truly are pathetic. Your ability to develop an actual plot is virtually non-existent too. All of your stories have fanon shit as a base and then get covered in how much of a badass you think Naruto is and how he should hate Konoha. Honestly? Grow the fuck up you little shit. Have you even read/watched Naruto even once in your miserable life? Naruto's childhood wasn't even that bad. He was NEVER physically harmed. He NEVER had people calling him a demon. He never had people trying to kill him. Your lack of knowledge in regards to the Naruto series truly makes me question just why the fuck you're even writing for it? You clearly don't like anything about it since you change his past entirely, end even then you don't seem to like that as you still make him hate Konoha. All I can really say now is that you are a fucking idiot that needs to research the shit you write about. You truly do suck shit at writing. In this chapter alone there were over 10 different atrociously written run-on sentences. VFSNAKE you receive so much praise from idiots. Stop listening to them and start improving your damn writing." ~ "Garbage chapter 4. Nov 25, 2015 You know, he's right. All you do is retread the same ground over and over again, VFSNAKE. All the people on this site are nothing more than yes-men willing to bow to you under the whims when you give them the wish-fulfillment they desire. Many good writers on this site may have their cliches, but when they deliver on quality writing, they get no reviews, no praise, and many of them are just scraping by while being unmotivated and unrecognized to write because of people like you that cater to the masses. When the real good writers are gone and this site has every cliche in the book with nothing new, I know people here will still eat garbage over real food. |
![]() ![]() It was an amazing story can't wait for more :-D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter 3: informing the hokage of the boy potential, not boys potential. |