This is an amazing story

BAD ASS !

i havent even started this but damn these reviews, no ones forcing this down ya throat, theres no need to vent so heavy. or be so wierd, the nigga under me is on something else

when before get his god mother Naruto had get to a cell when the sands kids had stay in when then he had seeing her now sleeping in bed and when walking in now and get her up now and then saying to down now gril you my now my lover now and both had sex now and feeling on her now and then saying to a woman like you here made me mad and now are in power we will show them why it is not cool , when think of it now , she ask why now my lord and lover ,we took over soon gril , when doing it now west the last of it now siting in his new house warlord queen Sammy who get took out and her crown now it his feet now and Naruto with big hands put on now and feeling it now a blue one and saying her you house lands and money now my , when in the bed room now he sleeping with his wife now ion now , feeling on her now saying to her think you my gril she seeing his muslces get big so much up now , her in her clothers be took off and saying i well be happy for you kill my mom and dad and now with the money all the gold now i get form my fools in my clan now are my , ho now you my now , ion yes Naruto , my lord and lover , when she was out sleeping now , he sill think back when he took out his ex tame met and when doing it he took out the fool sol out and putting into his own body now and seeing it powers and eyes now are my , he then seeing sakrura now his lover and sex slave now ,

You know it's not the best around, but hell this type of novel is a guilty pleasure of mine.

For me, I see this as a quickie story. The pacing and tone are all over the place in this chapter. It's not enough to make someone not want to read it but it feels like your jumping around to a ridiculous extent for no reason at all.

Why do you even like Suigetsu? He seems like a cocky little shit who chokes on balls while getting buggered by his father.

I can see you really like Kimimaro. Why? Is it because he was an evil tool? Or is it because he's your way of justifying your "philosophical" bullshit. In most of your stories, you try to justify the callously evil actions of your protagonist. You make the villains the "good guys". Yet you vilify the other characters in your story ho do the same thing. If I had one word to describe you, it would be "hypocrite".

I think you try to do this for multiple reasons.
1) You are an asshole who tries to paint himself as "misunderstood" when really, you're just simply an asshole. You use philosophical and logical gymnastics to justify your own bullshit. You say your bad actions and character is because of your past, or therefore must be understood and sympathized with. The flaw with that is, bad actions are still bad actions. The path to hell is paved with good intentions. Hitler had a rough childhood. Pol Pot did. Many evil people in history had horrible childhoods. Ranging from rapist to murderers. Yet it doesn't justify their actions. In can explain why, but it still doesn't make it right. Your past doesn't justify your current actions because you always have a choice.

2) You feel miserable with how certain events turned out in life, so you vent in your fic. Every single "righteous" anger you have you funnel into the form of your characters. Judging by how your character treats Tsunade, your also how mother issues (or issues with some sort of leading woman in your life). Though in some regards, I can't blame you entirely. Women can be just as shitty, if not more shitty than men.

3) You are a hypocrite. Your character Naruto claims that he hates when people shackle him and others down, but yet he does the very same thing to other people. In your other fic, he hated how people tried to force people into relationships, yet he forced Jiraiya and Tsunade into one because he felt he "knew better than them". Isn't that what the Council, the Elders, Sandaime, and Danzo use as justification? That they felt they knew what was better for Naruto, Konoha, and the Elemental Nations? So basically, Naruto is using the very same tactics and justifications as the very people he vilifies and hates. So really, he is no different than the rest of the scum.

Reread the stories your wrote. Down to it's core, what really is different from Naruto and the other villains? Naruto often uses the same justifications and bullshit as the other evil characters. Even in this fic, he states that he hates people who lust for no reason, and forces their will on others. Yet, that is exactly what Naruto is doing. For fucks sake, he literally calls what he's doing "Konquest". It's fine if Naruto admits to and is another villain who conquers the others. But for you to state and claim throughout the story that he isn't, is both hypocritical and laughable.

Why does everyone make naruto look like his teachers when he trains with people in crossovers sometimes it makes sense but times like these it's just annoying

Dude, that was great

A little sad with Shao Kahn's death, but you made up for it.
Good job, and please try and update

I think it would've been deter if Minato was the son of Kotal Kahn instead of sage of six paths.
maybe someone could re'write it with idea mind.

bad raiden. yay!

Thank you! It's freaking amazing how many writers leave out the fact that Orochimaru needs the tag or kunoi in the head to control the Edo Tenshi, although my favorite is how immortal Hidan is. Really? Cut his damn head off and put it in a storage seal, then destroy the seal!

Only remember vaguely MK4 so not a big idea of the backstory, but it was a good story

Fishy chan good one