|Reviews for Pelgo 14|
| Clevingerrr chapter 12 . 3/12/2014
This was one the first fanfics I had ever read on the site, back in my unregistered days. Still as good as I remember! It's a wonderful mix of established characters and OC's, and the swapping of POV's is well-executed and easy to follow. Even though I'm more of a Security guy myself, I can appreciate seeing the events of the story from the Resistance's perspective. I'm hoping that, one of these days, you'll come back to this story and give it a proper conclusion. Judging by the "Remember Pelgo 14" graffiti on one of the guns (forgot which) in the game, I'd imagine it won't end too well for either side...
| Bares His Teeth chapter 3 . 9/9/2012
cool story keep wrightin
| Foreteller of Three chapter 11 . 8/31/2012
This gettinh good, update as soon as you can
| Foevergaurd chapter 7 . 4/5/2012
This is a really awesome story, I just decided to one day look for a Brink Fanfic, because this was an awesome game, an I found this master piece, keep up the good work.
| themysteriousman97 chapter 6 . 3/28/2012
HA, Nice opening to this chapter! Pretty violent, but still good. Now, since you know me, you know that that's my style! :P
Anyways, keep writing this story, pretty good, looks like its getting somewhere! I hope you just keep writing this. Also, I would BOLD the "POV" changes to make them clearer.
Good Job! I have reviewed!
| Foreteller of Three chapter 6 . 3/16/2012
Light: hm, things r starting 2 look bad for the founders, especially since the guests r starting to get angsty
Dark: Founders with a problem? It's their fault that they've haven't found da solution to everyone's water problem!
Me: But let's see how this'll end for everyone on the ark
| themysteriousman97 chapter 5 . 3/15/2012
Ok, I clicked the blue line of text, I thought that the chapter was somewhat less "morbid", I think about trains, and you failed to use the Chinese langauge in your fanfic... :P:D:P:D
-the very mysterious and you probably know who i am man who is also knows who you are... (im not a stalker...yet):)
| FeeptheNinja chapter 5 . 3/13/2012
I FINALLY REVIEWED EET
ARE YOU HAPPY NOW, MONSUIER GUILT-TRIP
but no seriously. eet's good.
... Arkoral is scary. •_•
| themysteriousman97 chapter 3 . 3/1/2012
You must keep writing... I will continually bug you until you post your next chapter.
-The Mysterious Man
| themysteriousman97 chapter 2 . 3/1/2012
Wow, you just couldn't get by with any story without making a Chinese stereotype. Allow me to quote the chapter, " the sound of his voice would have an equal effect on a room whether he were saying 'I'm going to shoot you all now' or 'Yes, Santa, I'd like a magical pony for Christmas'" Really? :P Anyways, good chapter and exellent writing. You should continue you guess who this mysterious man is?
| kingkorps chapter 2 . 2/25/2012
good job man I might have to start to writing BRINK stories now...
| thesalmonskin chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
No, definitely not a one-time thing. I just don't have access to a PC with Internet access very often, so I won't be able to update too often.
| kingkorps chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
please dont tell me this was a one time thing