Reviews for Mother
AuthorDude99 chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
Ya, Arcee seemed to have dated every member of team Prime on the show. I'm glad I'm not the only one to notice that.
SlipknotGhidorah chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
Yeah, I agree with you. There should be more episodes where Arcee and June Darby are on screen together.
Mizz Arcee chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
It's very sweet! I want to read more! I have a question, the sire is Knock Out or Cliffjumper? Sorry for the dumb question
Foxbear chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
This was a wonderful story and mere fluff is too shallow a description of something so deep.

The grammar and sentence structure were excellent.

The plot flowed smoothly.

The pacing was perfect.

My favorite part was how you subtly depicted their relationship. Not just what you wrote "onscreen", but the suggestion that their relationship is close enough to warrant completely unsurprising night time visits and chats.

I too wish they could get more on screen bonding time. (and have written a few fics of my own to satisfy that want)

Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to reading your other stories.
mokonahapuuuuuu chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
*glomps* adorable