Reviews for The Beginning of a New Republic
VeryStickyGlue chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
It's a little rough around the edges but I like it.

It's kinda odd how Harry opens up to them about his life, especially when they've just caught him after he stole from them and the enforcers are searching for him/offering a reward for his capture. Not to mention, he hid in the ally yet he can apparate. Doesn't make much sense. But anyway...

It's a pretty good start. I hope to read more.

Naginator chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
Ha nice like the idea look forward to more and when he meets windu
El Imperatore chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
Interesting new idea :-)

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Your cool Harry rocks.
starboy454 chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
excellent start to your new story
GenoBeast chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
Just a personal opinion but I don't think the cliche 'relatives call me freak' was needed. Not being really wanted should have been sufficient, especially if you already include the idea that Harry read fantasy literature and experimented with his magic. Some kids don't need to be in verbally abusive situation to really wish their life was better. Every time I see some of the bad cliche's on abuse, it makes me uncertain about where the story will go because if the author is willing to use one then its possible another 'cringe' worthy cliche will be used.
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