Reviews for The Beginning of a New Republic
Eyolf chapter 4 . 1/4/2013
very enjoyable, keep it up.
kopakanuvafan20 chapter 4 . 12/16/2012
So Anakin is going to become Darth Vader much sooner that normal then. But how much sooner?
wy chapter 4 . 12/13/2012
What the fuck does "Semi-Intelligent" even mean? By far the stupidest thing I've ever seen in fanfiction. Seriously, what the fuck? Stupid idiot.
Calen chapter 3 . 11/1/2012
Funny, but bit too cracked out for my liking. Good luck to ya tho.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/30/2012
too much crudity. Cunt...really? you had to? How vulgar.. although it certainly fits with the rest of your juvenile, puerile, 'story'.

Please, even if this IS a crack story.. fell free to develop some actual writing skill and present some plot structure and character building.
Olaf74 chapter 4 . 10/11/2012

*lies out of breath on the floor*
HellsMaji chapter 3 . 10/10/2012
Well the first chapter was great. The following two that you turned into retard crack not so much.
PotterinCanada chapter 4 . 8/30/2012
can we please get an update with harry walking in on padme? pretty please
NickNova chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
"If Harry seems a bit too powerful, then go read another story to your liking."... Gladly Good luck with this.
killroy225 chapter 4 . 8/26/2012
maybe you could have made harry a little weaker, but then again there is always artistic license. please continue this.
J.E.P 1996 chapter 4 . 8/21/2012
when is the next chapter going to come out?
god of all chapter 4 . 8/14/2012
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon
Ofunu chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
First chapter and you sir (or maybe lady, I don't know) have already won me over!
Eros Amor Black chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
I love your Harry! Fantastic start!
Penny is wise chapter 4 . 8/7/2012
Awesome chapter. I like this Padma so much better lol.
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