Reviews for The Beginning of a New Republic
BengalDarknessTiger chapter 4 . 8/5/2012
The chapter was awesome and going to take the SAT exam?Can you tell me what's it like?Or maybe give me a link?
GreatStarOcean chapter 4 . 8/5/2012
It seems to me that you're trying to hard to be funny. You make Mace Windu a complete idiot and Palpatine getting knocked out by a falling lightsaber? This had the potential to be great but I'm not liking the direction this story is going. I'll give it another chapter or two but I don't see this holding my interest much longer.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/5/2012
You are aware that Sideous didn't recruit Dooku until after Maul was killed since he didn't have the time to train a new one from scratch. On top of that Dooku's reasoning for leaving the order was due to the fact his former apprentice Qui-qon was killed.

Might be helpful to do the research so you don't end up looking stupid. Not hard to look at wookiepedia for the proper information.
thunder18 chapter 4 . 8/5/2012
Great chapter Update soon
Arthorius chapter 4 . 8/5/2012
As for that lightsaber falling out of the sky, maybe you have let to be on instead of off and plaptine's head is cut off from his body...

Dericof Diname chapter 4 . 8/5/2012
I can see that you are planning to put Annakin and Harry one against each other at some point, the two possible chosen ones.
In the mean time, Harry is about to drive the Jedi order to the limit of their patience.
I like Padmé moment of rebellion, is a shame that Harry wasn't there to witness it.
Hope to read more soon.
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 4 . 8/4/2012
I like it! **
Zikarn Krais chapter 4 . 8/4/2012

Not Aniken, lol.

And oh sh*t! Dooku? This will not be good... chapter 3 . 8/3/2012
flames for this chapter would be good as it took a left some where in the writing. Sorry but I call as I see them.
nxkris chapter 3 . 7/31/2012
great chapter. i love all the issues harry is causing and cant wait to see what he does at this point, steal mace's second saber and therefore learns to weild two violet blades or perhaps steal a large number of sabers and reconstructs the ancient style of wielding multiple blades with the force? update soon.
Joe Lawyer chapter 3 . 7/31/2012
Very, very strange chapter that didn’t really fit the first two. I get wanting to be a little silly…but I was unprepared for this level of it.

I’m a fan of this crossover genre and Harry/Padme, but I think I’ll get off the train now before it derails.
Joe Lawyer chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
It doesn’t seem very honorable for a Jedi to extort from a little boy additional favors. In fact it’s quite the opposite. These are core traits you’re messing with…things that make the jedi who they are. It’s a bad precedent for the story, but I’ll continue for now.

I’m also a little surprised that Harry shows off these previously unheard of skills, including apparition, and yet the Jedi don’t act all that impressed or surprised. Very, very strange.

Harry has an interesting stash of objects. I’m glad Harry recognizes the value of a blaster. Jedi are ridiculous with all this ultra close range sword fighting. Good aim and a blaster means you can reach out and touch someone far far away. A light saber just doesn’t allow for that.
MAX chapter 3 . 7/28/2012
awesome fic, looking forward to more.
Light Lord Cybergate chapter 3 . 7/30/2012
All hail the Jedi thief.
Best of all Windu has to stay quiet as he would only embarrass himself if he accused Harry of stealing his lightsaber.

With Harry' magic he should be an interesting Jedi...or I don't see him agreeing to the jedi code.
Oh well...maybe the old one.
mwinter1 chapter 3 . 7/29/2012
Awaiting more.
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