|Reviews for The Beginning of a New Republic|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2015
Please update again
| frozzmagic chapter 1 . 12/26/2015
Great start...no anakin/padme...yay!...btw Harry STOLE lightsaber from Mace Windu...wow...quite a feat...hopely qui-gon jin or obi-wan will tale Harry as padawan...and will Harry Universe will become and influence...since there's a prophecy about him ...also hopely there's an explanation about 'Magic' and 'The Force'...whether is same..or not...can't wait for the next chapter...keep up the good work...
Sorry for bad grammar...:D
| Quhigh chapter 1 . 12/25/2015
This is great, I can't wait for your next chapter.
| Driven12 chapter 1 . 12/25/2015
LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT BIT.
| Kenka chapter 1 . 12/25/2015
He STOLE Windu's lightsaber? Loving this.
If Anakin gets picked up by the Sith he could be the counterbalance to Harry, and as for Harry being too powerful, try to limit what he could do without a wand like he could manipulate water but not create it, and he could make fire with hard concentration as fire is energy. he is going to need strong challenges in his training, adversity is what makes a story attractive.
I'm not saying nothing just giving a suggestion.
| Djberneman chapter 1 . 12/25/2015
Sounds very interesting
| Omega chapter 1 . 12/25/2015
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| Darlok chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
LMAO I love it. Several parts in the chapter had me cracking up. I look forward to Harry's meeting of the council and the man he stole the lightsaber from. I am curious how that came about and wonder what Windu had been doing there in the first place. Also I look forward to how you develop Harry and Padme's relationship and how different it will be from cannon. Though I find it slightly odd that Padme would find Harry attractive at such a age their at unless Harry appeared older due to the life lived under the harsh tatooine conditions. Could be explained that the age difference is due to different planetary cycle times when in actuality closer than one might think. Also how will Padme respond to Harry's seemingly reading her mind without permission as her personality from the movies to me seem to lean to a bit of a violent automatic response such as a slap. But that in the end would merely confirm to all involve that such stated thoughts were in fact correct leading to more embarrassment for the young queen. As for Anakin if you plan to keep him in the story maybe have Qui-Gon return after the events of Naboo and Obi's ascension to knighthood to follow up and chase down a perceived force tug he might have felt earlier. I'd be curious to see how you would show what would happen to Anakin if Qui-Gon had his way.
Anyways please update soon and often as I love these kind of stories. I only hope you don't rush the Harry and Padme pairing too quickly and give some more entertainment off their hormonal tension.
| ltak2003 chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
Love the first chapter! Please keep writing!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
This is pretty cool, hope you update soon. :)
| Marionette01 chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
Lol. Just nonchalantly says he has Mace Windu's lightsaber. No one noticed that Mace lost his lightsaber
| Le Diablo Blanc2 chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
thank god no anakin/padme in this im sorry but their chemistry was non existant in the prequels
| god of all chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon...
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2015