Reviews for Soothing the Fire
Fwiends chapter 2 . 10/27
This was freaking amazing~~! You deserve way more reviews/favourites! So hot and Damn! I could totally picture L as a masseuse and Light as a stiff businessman XD Great job ;)
Amoe Chan chapter 2 . 2/5
That was seriously hot. You are, by far, one of the best smut fanfic writers I've ever chanced upon. Thanks for this wonderful kink meme! :D
Guest chapter 2 . 12/7/2014
Someone open a window because this is probably the hottest DN fanfic I've ever read!
YaoiBakaFangirl chapter 2 . 8/15/2014
*Nosebleed to the Max!* Oh! So good, it was! I was thinking about if L was going to massage Light's feet, too, you know- like in the anime. Great job! Please write more!
Taco-chan chapter 2 . 6/6/2013
This was so freaking hot. Ugh I think my ovaries exploded it was so amaz
Guest chapter 2 . 5/2/2013
Hot and awesome :D sorry but I found two mistakes that are bugging me, that is hole-not whole when you were writing about Light's ass and shining not shinnying :D really sorry for mentioning but I just couldn't leave that... English is my second language but still I can't help correcting people... Please don't hate me :D Really, I loved that story :3 one of the best ever :)
RosellaKlaine chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Oh mah goodness, that was SO hawt! I really liked all of your details with Light's massage, and I also liked the characterization for Light as well; it worked out really well for the story! One of the hottest smut fics I've read! Great job, and keep up the awesomeness! :D
inactiveaccountterminated chapter 2 . 9/1/2012
God this story was amazing! Hot, sexy and steamy all put into one! Great use of detail and description. It was just brilliantly written and I only wish there was more! Great job!
silentwinged chapter 2 . 8/26/2012
Me likey :3
Damn hot O.O I'll check out your other stories too! 3
theneoncake chapter 2 . 8/24/2012
That...was...very...*wipes blood from nose* :D
PastelMushrooms chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
AHHHH this was sexy..
*drools at the thought of Light's back muscles...getting massaged...*
kate-sama chapter 2 . 7/1/2012
sequel please!
Ruin Takada chapter 2 . 5/20/2012

Hi. I heard about this from sashocirrione, of course, who'd filled this kink meme as well. As she's someone who's stories I usually read, I read hers first, and then decided to read yours, since she'd recommended it.

I really like this one, I really do. The smut wasn't the greatest in the world, but the build-up was excellent, which is amazing because some smut authors are great with the act itself and not the build-up, which is just as - if not more - important. Just work on your smex writing, and you'll be golden.

I'm not sure if you're a native English speaker, or if you were just confused by the homophones (words with the same sounds but different spellings, like 'bear' and 'bare'), but you did get a few spellings wrong. I don't usually correct people on spellings, because I often have to go the whole hog and correct all of them, which is frankly tiring for me, discouraging for the author/victim, and something I should only have to do when I'm beta-reading. Anyways, I'll correct these ones, because if I don't, you'll keep using them, and certain misspellings make good fics feel cheap.


Waste - Waist. You use 'waste' for rubbish, or to express a certain kind of shame, as in 'what a waste'. For the narrowest part of a person's torso, you want 'waist'. You should really learn this one, because this mistake is particularly hated in fanfic-land. I've been turned off many fics because of this mistake, so do learn it.

Pecks - Pecs. Birds peck, and one bird pecks, but for the chest muscles, you really want 'pecs'. It's short for 'pectorals', the proper term for those muscles (the short form comes from 'PECtoralS'). This isn't so much of a sin as the above correction, but an important one nonetheless.

Whole - Hole. If something is complete, or you have all of something, it is 'whole'. However, if it isn't, then it's likely that there's a 'hole' in it (think of the song, 'there's a HOLE in my bucket'). The anus, known colloquially as the 'asshole' or 'butthole', is often referred to in smut as the 'hole'. I've heard of authors using the 'whole' spelling as part of an effort to censor it, but that's no good. If you're gonna talk about smut, you should go all the way and not skip out on some of the less pleasant parts, because some of it ISN'T pleasant.

I hope that's helped you there. I've not been the kindest in this review, but I do believe in using reviews for their primary purpose - to critique and help an author improve. If you have any questions for me, or want to yell at me because I've told you something you've already been told 13 times before, then go ahead. If you want a beta, I'll be happy to help, of course.

Thanks for the great story,

Ruin Takada XXX
Motaku1235 chapter 2 . 4/29/2012
Damn...that's all I was thinking as my mouth drooled. That and a certain four letter curse word. Lol. GREAT job. I applaud you. *clap-clap*
Professor Sexymore chapter 2 . 3/20/2012
Hot. Definitely worth reading and probably now a favorite one of my favorite lemons.
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