|Reviews for Behind the shattered looking glass|
| Elise the Writing Desk chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Hmm...damn. I'm interested. I really wish reading this won't affect me! *crosses fingers*
Hmm, on psychologically view, Edith is still a child. But I hate her because she wouldn't want to understand (but she's a kid!). She's like my younger sister...and I understand Alice because she's...well, psychologically like me. We wouldn't cry, because...well...why? Is it a must, to cry?
When I read Edith's mind about; 'She's not my sister. She didn't cry when mother died, and she ran away when Lorina died' (or something such), I unconsciously became angry.
Ugh, it's like, their relationship in reality (according to history) has came to reality. I mean, come on, Edith, grow up already! Alice is a free soul, she doesn't like being sappy, she's unattached to real things. If in history Edith, Lorina and Alice were close, but in this fanfic, despite how real Edith is portrayed, I think the little girl would think the same thing like this!
Edith thought about her older sister as if she was a fun-seeker-only. Well, we-err she IS! And nothing can stop us-er HER!
Enough with my stupid rambling, I'm thrilled to read next...prepare for my constant rambling. I mainly comment about characters and plot.
I wonder well you'll rewrite this, because some minor spellings are constantly seen XD But well done!
| AnimeLover4LifeXD chapter 6 . 8/5/2012
I really like it! Please, please, pleeeaaasssseee update soon! P.S. I love the characters! And I wonder are the guy characters cute? Just wondering X3. Great chapter, I love how her and the other characters are so funny and also how you added some characteristicts her sister Alice has like from your cute animal ear scene! And I'm guessing in that flashback the rabbit they played with in the rain was Peter. Am I right? Well anyway love the story! XD
| Shiro-chan chapter 6 . 8/1/2012
Im a bit confused on chapter 2. It seems like you uploaded it from the bottom of chaper 1. Anyways, I normally don't like OCs in fanhiction instad of fictionpress, but I suppose it actully makes sense why this story needs a new cast of characters but how will they meet Alice a her Wonderand? Are they in a different dimention completely or just in a different country? I hope you clear that up in a few chapters. Other than that, why the crap is there a wife for Hatter? I can' t immagn Blood with one!
| AFireInside23 chapter 6 . 7/23/2012
I see some Mally in Mewnet anyways this chapter was an awesome read! You've got such a good story going on! I believe she'll go to the coast. After all, who wouldn't want to go to an ocean?
| serasenshi chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
I just finished chapter one, actually, but it seems good so far, my only problem is that Edith is 8. I could've sworn Alice was the youngest sister...
But this seems to be going in an interesting direction, so I'll continue reading.
| xxxPureRosexxx chapter 6 . 5/13/2012
I thought you abandon his for a second, glad its not! I don't mind waiting longer for a even longer chapter. That means I can keep up my guess on what might happen, and I rather be kept in the dark, learn about everything when it comes out. That and I don't know who he next people would be. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| xxxPureRosexxx chapter 5 . 4/12/2012
Nice work, I love where this is going and I like the new characters, can't wait to see them all meet Alice and the others.
| TheNextAlice chapter 5 . 4/12/2012
Haaaah~ this is so awesome! That was a sigh of content, by the way. Now, next six characters? It's random guess time! I say: Cheshire Cat, Mad Hatter, Dormouse, March Hare, Tweedle Dee and Tweedle Dum. Because I think Edith is going to the Hatter's tea party - there's a house there - and the Cheshire Cat will pop up. I can't remember if she's met him yet or not though... (_);
| TheNextAlice chapter 4 . 3/26/2012
King Gavin... K. Gavin. Makes me think of Klavier Gavin :3
I liked the whole 'chess-board-game-event' thing - it was awesome. I'd love to see one in real life.
| SmileRen chapter 4 . 3/26/2012
Nice chapter :)
| xxxPureRosexxx chapter 4 . 3/25/2012
Poor Vorpal, he gets teased a lot by the king and queen, very nice! I can't wait to see who they meet first! Update soon!
| SmileRen chapter 3 . 3/19/2012
Will Edith set things straight between Alice and herself?
| TheNextAlice chapter 3 . 3/15/2012
Two thumbs up from me :) what you wrote about wonderland being ripped apart and all, makes me think of American McGee's Alice. Ooh that scares me.
| xxxPureRosexxx chapter 3 . 3/14/2012
This is so interesting, I'm starting to get it better. Also! Just one question, would Alice and the other Country of Hearts residence come up? That would be a very twist in the plot, but just wondering you don't have to. Can't wait for the next update!
| xxxPureRosexxx chapter 2 . 2/28/2012
Ohh the vorpal sword sweet! I like it )