|Reviews for Of Wealth And Sodomy|
| AleXanDraPR369 chapter 1 . 1/17
The world needs more sick people like you and me.
| Please send me messages chapter 1 . 11/20/2014
| kriskristen chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
I'm not sure if you are still on here, but I read this story in particular when I can't think of anything else to read. I like this one. I agree that it's about time someone made Kakashi a bit arrogant and absurdly rich. Thank you for such a good one-shot. ,
| Juubi.Host chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
This is great wanking material XD
| Uchiha Riddle chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Awww...I'm sorry, I'm a sucker for twisted happy endings and that goodbye was so sad! Well, can't wait to see more of your writings! Ciao!
| Kira the cat chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
*Dies a million times over - * I want to kill Kakashi now because of this.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
I'm very disturbed by how much I liked this story... It's awful (in an oh so good kind of way) and I think I need therapy! Hahaha. Anyways, good writing. Probably one of the best/disturbing lemons I've ever read. Cheers!
| HatakeAttakai chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Four words. I FUCKING LOVE YOU
| blisblop chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
Thank heavens he paid him that name on the cheque for Sasuke to an abserd ever, rape hound aside, the boy liked him so it's consensual, in fanfic land no where to a kid, he will not thank him for that.I feel kinda grossed out and I ove this pair
| SweetJane72 chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
So sick, but yet so very interesting. I really liked how warped and demented Kakashi was, as well as that they just moved on after it was over. Twisted, yet great.
| Sickra chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
First let me say that you have incredible writing skills and that you do very well to make something difficult to not continue to read.
That being said, I now move on to the purpose that I'm leaving a review. I don't really leave reviews on too many stories. In fact,
I read way more than I consider reviewing... but this was definitely one of those stories that demands opinions and thoughts had
while reading the story.
At first, I liked the flow of the story, I found Kakashi a bit attractive even though he was arrogant and a bit disturbingly aware of how
'irresistible' he was. And then we find Sasuke not too long after the beginning. Now let me defend myself; I knew what this story was
going to be about, as I always read summaries. But I did not think that by minor, you mean an 11 year old boy being drugged and
nearly raped while being recorded by a 30 year old man that was, hilariously ironically, a lawyer.
I love that contradiction, by the way.
Anyway, I just was unsettled by the way Sasuke was treated. You have amazing skill, but that skill is insulted with something like
this. This isn't me saying this story sucked, it is simply the opinion that this story was unsettling. But like I said, once I had started
I had needed to finish the entire story. In the end, I'm not quite sure how I felt as I have mixed feelings over the whole thing.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
WOW I really like the way this story is written would not mind if there was a one-shot sequel LOL
| Composingjealousy chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
omfg fkjdshfsgkl hawt :D
| Calumen chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
I am conflicted over this story. On the one hand, you can write sex scenes that would make a saint come in their shorts... On the other hand, everything else is a bit...Rough.
Please don't think I'm trying to disparage your story, because I honestly loved it. (I'm not going to go into detail about how much I loved it. Let's just say, I've got it bookmarked.)
But parts of it left me feeling unsettled. For example, after Sasuke has passed out and Kakashi takes him to his bed (by the way, I hate to nitpick, but 'dollars' are a dead give away for North Americans, and no offense, you don't do yourself any favors by using the word. Ryos are the established currency in the Naruto verse... Wow, that was the most douchey-a**holey thing I've ever said in my whole life. Feel free to ignore me.) Back to the point, after Kakashi takes Sasuke to his bed, you mention (sorry to get graphic) that he "slaps him around with his dick" a little bit.
My question becomes: Why?
No offense, but minor, inane details like that can dampen the overall tone of the story. You already had one of the most KICKA** sex scenes of all time; there was no need for that kind of detail.
I'm being such a nitpicker, I KNOW, but I know for a fact that you're an amazing writer and I just wanted to maybe give you a bit of perspective, from a reader's point of view.
Other details, such as the casual mentions of "hardcore child pornography", while not out of place in your story, are really just thrown in much TOO casually. I was right there with you, until I read that. Then I was like: "WTF? Where did that come from!"
My point is, you are an amazingly strong writer, and this story is a testament to that. I'm not trying to flame, please believe me, I just wanted to give a little perspective outside the normal, "OMFG I LUVED YUR STORY"
Although I really did love your story. It was FANTASTIC.
Seriously, one of the hottest things I've ever read.
Please forgive me if this review upset you, as that was not my intent. But let me just say again; I LOVED YOUR FRICKIN' STORY!