|Reviews for oh dream maker, you heartbreaker|
| Separator chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
I really like this kind of disjointed, chronology-challenged stories. And you do it well.
| wontyoutakeachance chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
I didn't understand much but I found this great anyway. We can clearly see the difference between Forwood and Klaroline. There's a clear contrast. With Klaus, Caroline is discovering and experiencing so many things, while with Tyler, it always ends up with sex. Sure, Caroline and Tyler love each other, the writers made that clear on the show. But on here, her affection towards Klaus and vice versa, is genuine. And honestly, that's beautiful.
| Giulia chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
I don't understand T.T but it's such a beautiful a story 3
| theycallherkaush chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
ahhh, i get it, i get it. yeah, at first i was like, wtf is going on, but then i was like, "OH DUDE." yeah. i wrote a fic all chronologically whack this one time. i thought it worked pretty well, cause the way i did it, it was kind of sort of like two stories with the same people, but one was present and one was past. no/yes?
yeah, it is kind of hard to follow, but i think that's the beauty of it - it's a puzzle that you have to put together. so i like it. yeah.
(wait, she does choose klaus in the end, right?)
| queenc.writes chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
This story is beautiful... kinda like a VD version of memento. Loved it!
| goonies chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
"She doesn't know when it happens, but somehow their fingers end up tangling together so tight she doesn't know where she ends and he begins." Oh god that was my favourite part. Actually, I had a lot of favourite snippets but that was definitely top three. This fic was great and I loved the Klaus/Caroline interactions. The silent 'i'm sorry' almost killed me though. What I'm getting at is that I loved this. :)
| lightning veins chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
i don't even know what to say. sweet baby jesus, hannah, why don't you just RIP OUT MY HEART AND BREAK IT IN TWO? that would hurt less than your words did. i really liked that there was forwood mixed in with the klaroline - normally i get really turned off by that because klaus is perfect and caroline is perfect and how can you even deny perfection, like seriously - but in this case, it worked. beautifully.
| pariswindspeed chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
God, this is absolutely amazing. The ragged flow is brilliant. It seriously makes it so wonderful, gives it depth.
I am in love with this.
| acronymed chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
OH MY GOD MY HEART
i can't even
there are no words
| chillwithJyl chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
Seriously, I loved it!
| shylace chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
Very lovely piece, and the non-chronological quality makes it more enigmatic. It allows the reader to imagine how the situation is playing out. It stands well as a oneshot, but I do hope that you'll write more.
| invisible-next chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
This was beautiful and heartbreaking.
| Calie1 chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
Hey, I really loved your fic. Although you felt like it was disjointed I really had no trouble following. And regardless of that I really loved the actual plot and the characters. It was a wonderful story. I hope you decide to write more Klaus/Caroline.
| flesh and bone telephone chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
The chronology mix up was divine, oh wow, I loved this jigsaw of interactions that just left the reader wanting because it's like a story that doesn't need a conventional beginning or end which just GOES with how unconventional these characters are!
I loved the imagery. Oh my god. How do you expect me to turn away from Egyptian cotton sheets? And glowing rooms? And all this divine tapestry of words and pictures and all the scenery porn you put in my head. So awesome. So seductive, and low tune which makes this relationship all the more irresistible in that neither can resist the pull they feel towards each other.
I am so glad I found a Klaus who didn't seem like a complete British stereotype rip off, he tags 'love' at the end of what he says but he doesn't end up sounding like a broken record. And oh man, he is sexy sexy.
most writers of klaroline tend to overlook Forwood like idiots, so I'm happy you worked it is. Seriously, you wrote these characters in ways that blow my mind, remain completely true to the show but also made completely your own.
I think. ugh. I think I might actually want to marry you.