|Reviews for Impossible|
| QueenOfDragons2 chapter 2 . 9/25/2012
It seems better, but you need more punctuation and it still feels a bit rushed.
| Athena Eudialyte Vewlpoer chapter 4 . 5/10/2012
I love the start of this story! It is a very plausible idea on how they regain life and how there are others. I like how your not rushing in the story.
Thank you for sharing this story with us. Please update soon.
| Bandling chapter 2 . 5/5/2012
Hey! I think overall, your grammar is fine, just a couple of things: I'm not sure if the last sentence is supposed to be italicized or not because my computer is broken, but if it's not, it should probably be in quotes, and the last sentence should look like: "Don't worry, 5, I won't fail you this time."
| QueenOfDragons2 chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
Very interesting. I wonder what will happen next.
I would like to point out that you made several punctuation errors, i.e. forgetting to put in commas and thus making some sentences sound weird, and forgetting to put periods at the end of several sentences.
I know that grammer criticism might be unusual, but I'm a bit of a stickler for correct grammer (I got that from my mom).
| PoppyECM.6-13 chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
that was very sweet! and i have a feeling resurection will feature in this tale...