You know it's sad really sad when you read the author's note for this chapter and it says everything was planned out that you had the entire story ready and then this got abandoned and never updated again well it's been over 10 years if you're still alive in real life will allow you I hope that you will someday be able to update this again I would greatly look forward to it you've got a lot of good stuff going here don't let it stay dead

More is going to happen with that particular Wraith and Harry.

I think I remember a story where the entity connected with Harry and then became something like a symbiotic pet.

Still no magic yet but a little more information on the greater magical world but other than ‘everyone in Britain is dead’ we got nothing else

So what’s left of the British Magical Community? Nothing? What about the Goblins and the Centaurs? House elves?

I really enjoy it so far. i hope you add more chapters soon

j'attends la suite de l'histoire avec impatiente ! x)

Damn. Don't you hate it when the story gets abandoned at the most exciting part? I was looking forward to Harry's next meeting with Steve.

I just checked your profile and you seem to be doing well. I know Stargate is pretty old by now and there isn't much new content, but if you ever wanted to return, know that there are still people interested in reading your stories.

great story, please update!

beautiful

All good things end to soon

Lame, why does Harry have to be a little bitch about women paying him attention. I'm not saying that he should be sleeping his way through the base but to be actually terrified of women checking him out is just pathetic.

The Atlantis Expedition happened in 2005. I really don't think that it would be all that hard to actually wait the 7 years and actually have some decent background for Harry after Voldie. Noone, and I mean noone, would go from blowing up a train station to end a secret civil war to working for the Pentagon. Especially considering the whole nationality thing. It doesn't matter how good he was, no government agency would let a foreign national work on their cyber security without them being naturalized and actually have some invested loyalty to their nation. I can see if he was working for the British government and the IOA tagged him, but even then they would want him to get an education in it.

That an veganHarry, while new, just sounds dumb.

I guess there aren't much chance to have another update but gosh I loved it reading it so much. I don't care if it's a slow burn, I love how you are writing and giving up something realistic and interesting. I love Harry friendship with the marines, and also Rodney and Beckett!

When you write any story, you should keep the tenses used in the story in the same time frame. You switch from using past tense phrases like “he looked” and present tense phrases like “he looks.” The best way to write would be to use the past tense, such as “he looked.” Using the present tense is not as easy to read, and it also comes across as being very unsophisticated. Using present tense in a written story makes the story very hard to follow, and switching between tenses makes it even worse.