Reviews for Package Deal
kirsty21 chapter 1 . 5/8
cool
Guest chapter 1 . 2/17
Good haven't seen one like this in along time it was kinda weird in a good way.
EmmyBearlovesHelen21 chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
I have question? ok if they made a pact is it because they like each other but what to try a three-some or is it because there brothers and they dont find kissing each other with tongue kinda awkward?
nichole.smith chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
Eww haha xxx
esinger chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
SWEET! I love that you had bill and Charlie make the pact to only date the person. awesome story!
SwissSlash chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
Jayson,

I am working my way through your Harry Potter stories (here and on WorldOfSlash) and I have to say, it is refreshing to find your work. Many writers on the fan fiction sites offer an immature approach to story telling, but with you its like reading "real" fiction, the type that pulls you in and surprises you.

I look forward to your new creations, and the new chapters for already established story arcs.

I also am a writer in my spare time, but to date, I have been nervous about jumping in to publishing, although I am working on a project with a reasonably famous celebrity at the moment, though I dont know if that will work out or not.

Well I hope you didn't mind me expressing my appreciation for your work ... keep it up.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
-Droolz- Hmm yummy slash! I love it! Thank you for writing and i hope can be persuaded to write more (perhaps longer?) Bill/Harry/charlie! This is really awesome and i'll probably check out more of your stuff if you have any!

Shiya
sneaky lunitic spy chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Hmm interesting i like this threesom pairing :)
kaley the vampire lover chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
i love this soooooo much!
No.79 chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
I love this fiction. It is very cute.
Actually, this is the only fiction I can manage to find of this pairing so far.
Hope there might be a sequal.
A Smouldering Soul chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
Hm was a good story, be more interesting if there was more
cethmistmyk chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Lovely idea! I wish you would expand, but it is wonderful the way it is now!
Ronin101 chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
A very interesting vow & relationship concept/vow/contract to each other. This was a lovely little plot/timeline summary, and I could see where you could really embellish and flesh it out with character development, etc, and make it quite a bit longer if you were inclined. A very fun read and inspired some fun daydreaming when I was done! ;-)
Shaddock Liu chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
it's a lovely story,will you have the sequel?
Bronkwin2 chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
this is a great story and i understand your reasonings and stand by you i was wondering if you would concider doing a sequel as their are so few of this pairing about and it's one of my favourites. i do understand if you cannot do this however whatever happens this is a great story and i enjoyed reading it.
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